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Soulicide - Empty Prescription

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 26th, '10, 03:59

http://www.zshare.net/audio/73037857aa9a00c5/

Put this one zShare this time, maybe some of y'all will check it this time lol. This song was done with my homie Crozz Cyde, he's on the second verse. Lemme know what you think, and leave a link to a song of yours you want thoughts on, I'll rtf :flower:
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Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 26th, '10, 19:12

^Mckeesport, pa?
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 27th, '10, 00:35

Yezzir! About half hour away from Pittsburgh.
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Re: Soulicide - Empty Prescription

Postby youngfire420 » Feb 27th, '10, 19:11

If you could upload to limelinx or something, ill give feedback for sure :)
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 27th, '10, 20:08

youngfire420 wrote:If you could upload to limelinx or something, ill give feedback for sure :)


http://www.limelinx.com/files/f0c9a9125 ... 67bc8a7b5d
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Re: Soulicide - Empty Prescription

Postby youngfire420 » Feb 27th, '10, 20:19

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:
youngfire420 wrote:If you could upload to limelinx or something, ill give feedback for sure :)


http://www.limelinx.com/files/f0c9a9125 ... 67bc8a7b5d


Thank you!

Well after listening, i like the beat. First verse, the flow wasnt there at times. When it went fast, it sounded really off. Lyrics werent bad though. Hook, was sick. Reminded me of something Em would do. Second verse, flowed alot better. Good lyrics too. Third verse, was better flow wise then the other too. Quality was just really bad on 3rd. Overall, the track wasnt bad. Quality couldve been alot better though. And flow needs to be worked on a bit! But not bad! :D
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 27th, '10, 21:50

youngfire420 wrote:
TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:
youngfire420 wrote:If you could upload to limelinx or something, ill give feedback for sure :)


http://www.limelinx.com/files/f0c9a9125 ... 67bc8a7b5d


Thank you!

Well after listening, i like the beat. First verse, the flow wasnt there at times. When it went fast, it sounded really off. Lyrics werent bad though. Hook, was sick. Reminded me of something Em would do. Second verse, flowed alot better. Good lyrics too. Third verse, was better flow wise then the other too. Quality was just really bad on 3rd. Overall, the track wasnt bad. Quality couldve been alot better though. And flow needs to be worked on a bit! But not bad! :D


Thanks a lot for the feed bro! I didn't think my flow was too bad, I know what you mean about the faster parts though, I think I put in a bit too many syllables :sweating:

The quality is also something I'm working on, right now we're just using a Rock Band mic and some random program we found on the computer and record in his grandparents house hahah. No excuse, I know, but I'm working on getting better production wise!

Again, thanks a lot for checking it out man, greatly appreciated :worship:
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Re: Soulicide - Empty Prescription

Postby YungNRuthless » Feb 27th, '10, 22:52

I like the beat, and i like the fast thingy you where trying, but it was a tiny bit off, and also i can tell your using a bad mic, what kind of mic do you have?, and if its not a great one i think you should sit back away from it a bit that will stop them poofs, and then try to turn your doubles down a little bit, i can hear em perfect lol thats not the way its spose to be, other then that its a good track. :y:
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 28th, '10, 01:21

YungNRuthless wrote:I like the beat, and i like the fast thingy you where trying, but it was a tiny bit off, and also i can tell your using a bad mic, what kind of mic do you have?, and if its not a great one i think you should sit back away from it a bit that will stop them poofs, and then try to turn your doubles down a little bit, i can hear em perfect lol thats not the way its spose to be, other then that its a good track. :y:



Thanks a lot for checking out bro, yea I'm working on the mic thing lol. Like I said, I'm still working with a Rock Band mic with a T-shirt wrapped around it lol. It's about all I got!
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