JBM - Dead Wrong
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JBM - Dead Wrong
by JBM » Mar 3rd, '10, 08:46
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Re: JBM - Dead Wrong
by GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 3rd, '10, 08:49
Not bad, but not great.
The carrots on your tombstone stood out a little more than your rhymes.
The carrots on your tombstone stood out a little more than your rhymes.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12
-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
-Matthew 7:12
-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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Re: JBM - Dead Wrong
by GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 3rd, '10, 09:02
Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it.
Maybe I'd be a little more interested in a full, original song.
I hope to see more from you.
Maybe I'd be a little more interested in a full, original song.
I hope to see more from you.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12
-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
-Matthew 7:12
-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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Re: JBM - Dead Wrong
by Redd Herring » Mar 3rd, '10, 09:57
The song was average... i think if you would have worked on the flow some more the delivery may have been better. It was as if some of you lyrics we're rushed out of your mouth which distracted me.
oh and yeah the carrots on the grave are also distracting haha.... The whole time i was trying to figure out why they were there haha
keep at it man and i hope to hear more from you also
oh and yeah the carrots on the grave are also distracting haha.... The whole time i was trying to figure out why they were there haha
keep at it man and i hope to hear more from you also
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Re: JBM - Dead Wrong
by JBM » Mar 4th, '10, 04:49
Thanks for the feed.
Some words were rushed out because I was experimenting.
Thanks again.
Some words were rushed out because I was experimenting.
Thanks again.
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