you need to fix your quality and way of mixing.
the beat is way too low.... your pella sounds clean, but there's a bit of distortion when u get hyphed up. so fix that.
I love your flow. and your delivery, what I really liked about this one is that you were enjoying yourself on the track, thats good.
although the content of your lyrics Hmm... I dont like it that much, I mean u had good punches and some funny and creative lines. but the general content was too wack. lol... u shout freestlye at the end hahaha...

... I dont mind, but other lil idiots gonna give u a hard time bcuz of it ha.
just, try to be more real on your music, fix up the quality, add ad-libs (voice overs)... and keep it up man, I dig ur style... also, maybe when u mixing add a slighty stronger reverb so it can sound more wet, I hate dry acapellas.
Good work, but can be improved
