this is the full version with 2 more verses. all GT.


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8843647
likes/dislikes..
leave a detailed feed and ill be sure to do the same


Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
$0 R3@L wrote:wow this is everything i hate about hip hop.
lazy flow.
repetetive hook.
ringtone sounding beat.
meaningless lyric content.
its ironic yet another track i dislike of yours for the same reasons.You obviously dont need or intend to use any tips or pointers anyone makes.
Mykull: yeah def radio..not really my style but this shit was still hot...your flow and lyrics are better than the average shit you hear on the radio and that makes the track better...i like the way yu switched it a bunch..the hook is simple...nice shit tho duke
Prah'Ject: Aight homie I see what you were trying to do, tryna make something commercial, something catchy..flow is good for the beat i liked it and the lyrics are somewhat amusing and it's somewhat catchy but cmon yo this track having any kind of legacy or longevity is out of the question, this track has little to no substance man and it depreciates the art in my opinion..but that's just my opinion. Like I said b, stuff like flow and delivery are all on point for the beat, quality is also decent, there is nothing you need to specially work on on your rap style, just the song as a whole man I don't think would be listened to twice because it's the same as alot of stuff out there and it doesn't give me (maybe im wrong) any sort of worthwhile emotion to check it again
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
Kosovic wrote:2) Might really sound pompous and arrogant but when i did MY part for this forum, and when people like ASP, Maybe, Killa, RS yeah even So Real, did THEIR part for the forum, and the audio section, you had no idea what a microphone is. We have every right to criticize.
Kosovic wrote:4) You are not appealing to anyone. Bitches money and the club dont even appeal to my country where we are 200% barbarians like Conan.
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
_Ironic_ wrote:actually I've been rapping for more than 10 years now...so before you knew what this forum was, I was rapping.
_Ironic_ wrote:and you mention Maybe? tell me why McMaybe considers me one of the best on this site then?
_Ironic_ wrote:you'll be given the right to criticize when you've done a song with a label signed artist like I have. until then, you're opinion in my music is laughed at.![]()
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_Ironic_ wrote:okay, im not trying to appeal to your country. In the United States, this is the type of hip hop music they play on the radio...what they play in clubs. and what bitches enjoy.
_Ironic_ wrote:lastly, I never attacked so real, if anything I told him I respect his opinion..go back and check YOUR facts.
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
$0 R3@L wrote:god you seriously believe this is a song that is worthy of club play?radio play? something the 'bitches' will like? really?
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
Xray wrote:Neither are you famous. But neither are you a rap superstar. Once you get all over MTV and start getting major buzz then come back and talk that shit from a superstar's perspective. But for now, you're still posting tracks on a forum. So know you're role and stop looking at life from a different persons perspective and not yours. Seriously bro, its dumb.
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
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