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Re: Simultaneous Endings

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 13th, '10, 07:16

Hmm I like the title of the track... sounds interesting

nice intro, but you gotta fix your mixing, I dont mean that is bad, but its not good for your delivery, since you have a quiet like way of spitting, you need a mixing that turns it strong and loud without distortioning the Amplitude of the sound waves.

I like the flow on the hook... until the "pretti on the ground"??? I didnt understood much cuz its very quiet.

also, dont get me wrong, but maybe you should step up a bit the emotion, cuz sounds a bit monotone u know?

but overall its a good track, like I said, I love the hook, verses flow smooth, and I like the underground vibe you got on this

Beat is hot too. :worship:
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