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Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby JBM » Mar 22nd, '10, 06:50

A song that's saying something :y:
More energy and emotion into your voice would have made this song better imo.
Good lyrics though.
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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby Tranquil » Mar 22nd, '10, 07:26

first off, i love the beat, good sample used on it :y: you sound really good on this track, you have the emotion and all that on lock, the lyrics are good to, not the best, but good little story that you are telling :flower: overall this is a good track, and i can see myself listening to it again, good job :y:

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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 22nd, '10, 20:10

beat starts off hot, then it comes in its kinda basic

story tellin on this is dope, flow is pretty smooth as well...

the beat grew on me as the track went on

2nd verse comes in pretty sick..delivery is better than first verse
quality is above average as well..

3rd verse again comes in sick. lyrics are nice as well. Hot way to finish

i like the beat chorus, its mellow and laid back, dope shit.

overall 8.5/10

i'll check for u again, this was nice homey. :y:
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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby Mr. Chambers » Mar 24th, '10, 04:33

i used thsi beat too lol

i liked the vibe of this...it was like an atmosphere track.....well how it was some story telling shit

flow was pretty decent....and your delivery matched the beat pretty good....

this was just a good overall song...good shit....i'm still gonna holla @ you about a collab...just gotta get some shit together
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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 24th, '10, 11:49

wow man, this is deep. Never heard this type of tracks from you, its good. I saw the youtube one, kept me more entertained :happy: hahaha

Quality.... Hmm... got me feeling funny here, I dont know if it is great or if it is just not too good.
holla at me on msn for that, I'd like to know what u did there

nice lil spot u got there for recording.... :o u white??.... hahaha :n: j/k hahahaha

very very good track but I feel like there could be more energy in you. You go in too dry. Need to pump up yaself man, specially for this kind of tracks. :y:
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Re: Never Comes.... Dont sleep on it!

Postby gutawafang » Mar 29th, '10, 08:24

Jazzy beat. I like. :y:

Flow is damn fucking good! :worship:
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