Coleon - Bloodsport (Mixed By C-Riz)

[Solace]

I'm checking it.

EDIT: Much better than your previous attempt. Nice improvement, though you fucked flow up around

creep into ya castle, camouflaged climbing castle walls
slicin' Adam's apples across with a scalpel toss

Ill be checking future drops

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

The Devil's Rejects!
Awesome, awesome, awesome.
That instrumental was godly.
Lyrics and delivery are unbelievably good.

God... damn it! I wish I had recording equipment.
Your stuff is inspiring me to get some shit, you using horror movie samples and shit.

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Hey man, let's say I have nothing for recording right now.

How much $$$ do you think it'd run me to get the essentials?

[Solace]

Also one more thing, the delivery felt held back. And especially knowing the Bekay track, he has SO MUCH emotion in his verses on that track it's crazy and I think if you maybe put it up a notch it would've been better. But overall great for like what, this being your 5th recorded?

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Wouldn't I need to purchase recording software?

[Robbie G]

I liked it dude, you have a good voice and the quality was much better. I'd definitely try to work on putting more emotions into your lines though and maybe some emphases on certain words. That would make the songs a lot more fun to listen to.

Keep it up

[Mr. Chambers]

Hey man, let's say I have nothing for recording right now.

How much $$$ do you think it'd run me to get the essentials?

About $1200 for a decent set up.


On topic: The beat was sick.. Your flow needs a little work and your delivery definitely is being held back. Pump yourself up, don't talk in to the mic lol.

O/A I liked the lyrics and the mixing was decent. Keep elevating dude

lulz @ $1200....i spent $250 maybe and i think we can all agree my quality's clean.....

[Arrinef]

damn that shit was dope

i was definitely feeling this shit.........*copies to ipod*

[B.A.D.]

Hmmm.... first thing... The beat choice is amazing... sounds like some Premo shit for JMT.... fucking amazing choice of beat.

the flow.... you have a good intention with it, but still needs practice so it can go to a better level

your voice.... hmm... 0% emotion. boring. need to put much more delivery and emotion into that.

the mixing is not perfect, but its good, actually very good for what its sposed to.

lyrics are great. work good for this type of track.

overall..... if this is your first/second w.e. time.... very good.

dope

[Tranquil]

Lovin' the beat and the scratches at the start, lyrics are pritty tight aswell. Your flow was on point, there was just one time that you fell of a little, but overall, this song is dope

[gutawafang]

Nice one man.

[Tranquil]

thanks guys , new verse coming today, gonna sound way more alive, stay tuned

cant wait man

[SajN]

Lyrics are great


The flow isn't quite there, but needs practise.
The delivery didn't work out, sounded like you were bored, so just put some more heart in it next time.

But not bad. I haven't checked out the first one you posted, so I will do it now after this.


Keep it up

[classthe_king]

Basically what everyone else said. Everything is great but the delivery. Keep improving

[Banks]

Dope!