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Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 15th, '10, 09:32

yes I like to make covers for my songs :y:
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tip: look at it when you are listening to the track... gives you some sadness vibe

I normally dont use soundclick beats, I hate to use them but... this one is amazing

TITLE: Trouble
ARTIST: Big Ax-D
PRODUCED BY: Epik Tha Dawn & Scarecrow
LINK:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/749899064e063d62/

http://www.limelinx.com/files/3adb70aba ... 3589da3f0e

LYRICS:

(Verse 1)
Before I met you I was happy, it was great to be living
I was around fourteen years old, before all my sinning
I was even doing good in school, no beef with anybody
no strong family problems, no drowning in bacardi
we were just friends, but we were like best friends
till a little spark blew between us, we could never understand
what guided us together, and what guided us apart
what shines up on the sun when we have play our part
it was a bit weird at first, we started witht his flirts
and I started to get jelous of eyes below the skirts
then it hurts, it doesnt works, made me go berserk
that was a first alert to what was was building in the works
so we started going out, its was cool, but it was foolish
we were so young, so stupid, so confused, we
were starting to fall for one another, then it broke
I never knew why, the love boat didnt float

(Hook)
And I never meant to cause you trouble,
I never meant to do you wrong,
And I, well if I ever caused you trouble,
And oh no, I never meant to do you harm.

(Verse 2)
I was in agony, I was in pain
I was so fucking depressed,..... $&$#@%
I was so stressed, so focused on getting hurt
I was so angry, I dissed you and didnt work
I wanted revenge, I wanted to make it blend
Payback then, you starting dating with my friend
I feel like shit, You got me out of my mind
so then we decided to evade us for a time
we wouldnt cross each other's paths, we were afraid
I made a whole a album with curses in your name
then the black roses grew when the sky was gray
The Golden Age made my life turn so great
so we thought we could pass that, and befirend again
I was so sad inside, bcuz I was not your man
but I pretended it was cool, I made you thought that I was strong
sooner or later you found out that shit was wrong
but....

(hook)
And I never meant to cause you trouble,
I never meant to do you wrong,
And I, well if I ever caused you trouble,
And oh no, I never meant to do you harm.

(Verse 3)
As time passed by we slowly started to enjoy it
and I look at it now, six years later and I love it
It was the best time of my whole damned life
and I thank you so much bcuz you controled the fight
I never meant to hurt you girl, I was simply fallen
I made like 80 tracks outta the beauty of my love
now I even miss it, I need to fall for another
but this world is so messed up, I wouldnt even bother
all Im trying to say is Im so sorry, but I do not regret it
what got us this close, we thought we wouldnt get it
but this is better, so much better, and I love you
I miss you so much, I want to go back just to hug you
and I will be there for you, doesnt matter where Im at
Mexico or Australia, Im still your friend, I will be back
(I never meant to do you harm) [I never meant to do you wrong]
Because I...

(hook)
And I never meant to cause you trouble, (I never meant to cause you trouble)
I never meant to do you wrong, (never meant to do you wrong)
And I, well if I ever caused you trouble, (and if I ever caused you trouble)
And oh no, I never meant to do you harm. (never meant to do you wrond.....)
Last edited by B.A.D. on Apr 15th, '10, 12:43, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 15th, '10, 09:47

omg this track is lovely....the delivery,the lyrics shit is nuts...
very good job Ax....love it for real..just the quality is a let down at some points...
1st verse: solid flow,great delivery....all together very solid...some pronouncation problems and i noticed personally in the middle your rhymes were a lil uncreative the "bezerk,work,skirt" parts...but yeah that nuttin major
2nd verse: omg the beginning nails it....i didnt like the transition to when you started singing for 2bars...could be smoother..but that singin part was off the hook aswell...just on the transition was some tighten up needed....if you know what i mean
3rd verse: honestly it was the weakest out of those others.....you kinda faded away with the 3rd verse...didnt know if it was meant to be..just personally kinda seperated from the two other verses...to me at least...

great beat choice fo sho :y: very good track as i said..love it
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Tranquil » Apr 15th, '10, 09:56

The beat is just :o dope. The lyrics are dope, a sad feel, and it fits the beat perfectly. I love this song, one of the best that i have herd from you :happy: Oh and the cover is dope to
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 15th, '10, 11:18

Up this on limelinx or some shit D, I wanna hear this! :b:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Tornado » Apr 15th, '10, 12:38

now that's your potential realised Ax, when you're on your emotional vibe, bearing your all on the mic. There wwere probably only 2 points where the flow didnt seem natural but this track has HUGE replay value man. Keep this shit up man 9/10
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Tash8 » Apr 15th, '10, 15:17

ax u gotta work on ur breathing, I hate hearing all those breathing during the song, it's annoying as fuck, especially the third verse

besides that lil nitpicking..great song..reall good I wasn't feeling the hook but besides that it was dope
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Slice » Apr 15th, '10, 15:54

your delivery is nice.. and the lyrics are perfect for this beat.
this song has a lot of replay value :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 15th, '10, 16:11

I'm just gonna keep it simple... this is fucking dope man! :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 17th, '10, 03:55

Wow, thank you very much to everyone

@C-Riz .- thanks man, Im glad you liked it, hahah this means that my song was nearly perfect hahahaha, I feel you on the uncreative rhymes, and youre rightm thanks for pointing it out

@Ruthless - thanks bra :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

@Tornado.- thank you my dude, I appreciate the comment, :worship: :worship:

@Tash.- Hmmm what hook?

@Slice.- thanks there fella, I appreciate the comment :worship: :worship: :y: :y:

@Jay.- when r we going to collab man?? :shakehead: hahahaha, thanks a lot for the comment, I extremely appreciate it

again, thanks to all :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby JBM » Apr 17th, '10, 05:32

The lyrics and mixing are great.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Tash8 » Apr 17th, '10, 05:45

Big Ax-D wrote:@Tash.- Hmmm what hook?


the coldplay hook, i just didn't like it.. i could barely hear it
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 17th, '10, 12:03

Tash8 wrote:
Big Ax-D wrote:@Tash.- Hmmm what hook?


the coldplay hook, i just didn't like it.. i could barely hear it


ah yeah, I hated that too (the volume) :n: , but well, I couldn't do much on that since this wasnt my production :sweating:

and Thank you JBM, I appreciate that, but any feed to help me improve tho'??
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 17th, '10, 13:03

We do need to hook up on a track man! Hit me back if you got something in mind! :smoking:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Banks » Apr 17th, '10, 14:07

Very good, congratulations, keep it up, great production! :y: :worship:

I'm waiting for the mixtape , when we have download?
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Re: Big Ax-D - Trouble

Postby Robbie G » Apr 17th, '10, 14:16

Really good track man

Great beat + Great storytelling = :worship:
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