Jay-19 - The All On Me EP (DOWNLOAD)

[Jay-19]

So, after some time, I'm finally finished with my EP!
It's kind of short, but what EP has 15 tracks, huh?

Mixing might be sloppy and bad to some of you, but to me, it's the best it can be.

The concept behind it:
I was trying to be versatile and tried different styles of rapping on this joint.
A lot of people have told me I sound the same on every track, so that's why I did this.
I'm very happy with the outcome of it and I hope you'll enjoy it if you decide to download.

I had more tracks for it, but I wanted to keep it short and picked the best 7 tracks I did for this.


Tracklist:
1. Paint It All Black
2. See You Next Time
3. All On Me
4. Rock To The Jam
5. Get High (feat. Tornado)
6. Don't Look
7. Superstylin'
http://limelinx.com/files/f9419224b6ea1 ... 913624925b
http://www.zshare.net/download/75418748eaf87bb5/
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FMQ1JWZS

Hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed making it.

[FAME]

*downloads* I've been bumping Paint it All Black since you first posted it and god I love that song. Will give in depth feedback once I listen to the whole thing

[Jay-19]

Appreciate it FAME!

[Solace]

Already downloaded it like right when you posted the link, skimmed and I'm pretty positive about this EP. Sounds good, but I'll give it full listens and post an actual review bro.

[Jay-19]

Good lookin' out Solace!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

DANG DANG!...DOWNLOADIN!
EDIT: Feedback

Paint It All Black-flawless track...rhyming is sick...on hook and verses..delivery flawless...mixing is on point...tho the hook could be mixed wider (if you know what i mean..panning and shit)

See You Next Time-your flow is kool but slips couple times imo...mixthe mix sounds dry on this...hook is mixed well...voices go well together...altho not really creative content wise...i thought your delivery could be more smooth...sounds a lil to angry for the beat..tho the lyrics are agressive hm...

All On Me- already told you....beat is super dope...again your delivery when you go angry doesnt fit the beat...(yeah found it out lol)...tho when you go to one liners like "u woke up like im frying" you sounds good on this beat..also i like the cocky overlays...flow is dope through out!

Rock To The Jam- hook is mad nice...the vibe..lovely....again delivery...i noticed you got the same delivery on a lot of tracks...IMO the delivery should match the beat...anywayz..flow falls off in 3rd verse..like the end of 2nd verse...mainly the delivery irritates cuz the beat is so laidback

Get High - Na Na Na Na....bet you wrote that when you was high ahha...eh its an okay track..flow is above decent...lyrics are c-riz approved...delivery is what im talkin about..you go along the beat..tornado improved shitloads from last i heard him...nice collab...two weedheads from TR

Dont Look- love the sample ahha...genious..your singin kinda works..good that you dubbed it down a bit...flow is nice to me...tho choppy at parts but yeah i can handle it....lyrics are entertaining haha..love them...nice ass track

Superstylin'- with some tight mixing this could turn out really great....1st of all i noticed on the hook...the empty spots after "superstylin"...delivery is nice...the beginning is tight towards the end it stretches itsself a bit.....2nd verse again fire...



Overall: lyrics are very good at parts..you got those punchlines like crazy...flows are well used...just some slip ups but sick overall...mixing is decent..i think with some professional help you def have the shot at gettin signed or make it big....delivery was the only flaw somtimes...at least to me..sounded the same couple times...like try out moreddelivery styles...if you get what i mean? but yeah EP was enjoyable from track 1 to track 7....keep it coming

[Jay-19]

Mad props for the feedback Riz!
Greatly appreciated!

[Tornado]

Downloading this and thanks for the kind words Rizzo

[Jay-19]

Thanks Tornado.
And props for being on that "dope" track.

[Jay-19]

Bumpin'.

[FAME]

Paint it All Black- I freaking love this track, and have been bumping it ever since you posted it on TR. The hook is so catchy I even remember the song by heart because I listened to it so many times. Your flow is perfect on the beat and wow the beat is great, love the guitar in the background really adds to it. Verses are all great too, plenty of entertaining punch lines.

See You Next Time- first thing that stands out at me is it’s another catchy hook, can’t get that shit outta my head lol. I mean the concept is nothing new, but I think you bring a some fresh ideas to it. You made me even wonder if your bro has that tattoo. Hmmm

All On Me- sweetttt, I’ve heard this beat and I always love the hook when I listen to it. Glad you picked it, it really works for you. Your flow fits perfect on point with the beat, great mainstream type sounding track.

Rock To The Jam- first thing that sticks out at me….your flow. It feels like it doesn’t fit the beat. Which kind of ruins the song for me, you sound so angry on a mellow style beat. Not that it can’t be done, but it sticks out to me. But damn, hook is killer again!!

Get High- nuuuu nuuu nuuu naaaa, omg such an simple hook can be well…so catchy! I’m not a smoker, but I always enjoy weed tracks for some reason….anyways you and Tornado ripped it, would love to see more collabs from you in the future.

Don’t Look- HOLY SHIT love the hook, mainly because I love that song your not actually that bad of a singer, it works on an emotional style track for sure. Pretty lyrics for sure.

Superstylin’- Hook was okay to me, it wasn’t stand out on the track, the third verse was the stand out part to me, liked the track because it had a laid back feeling to it, and you went with it.

Overall- It takes alot for me to bump a track a lot of times, so I think you did a good job overall with the EP, it has a lot of great punchines (playin football in the Himalayas, lol I remember that one a lot). The one thing I would change is your flow every once in a while, it seems like it stays the same for each song or at least the tone, change it up a little bit every once in while. I’ll certainly bump several of these tracks a lot, good job Jay.

[Tornado]

Quick Feed, The first 5 tracks are what make this EP for me, only critsicms for them is I don't like the chorus on See You Next Time, All On Me aint my style (but you held your own on this one) and you're too angry on Rock To The Jam, calm down Don't Look is cool, but nothing special, i feel the imaginative sample saves the track and Superstylin is alright but overall this EP is a solid 8/10. You have a real easy lsitening sound to get into and you've shown you're versatility on this and your mixing was basic but effective man. Simple shit but is the Tape of TR so far this year.....

[Le Tunisien]

this EP worths more attention,downloading now will feed later

[Le Tunisien]

see you next time: i like the lyrics cuz u speak from the heart,the hook was okay,flow was locked..some lil flaws here and there though especially at the first part of ur 2nd verse but good song overall...1st verse is the best 8/10

get high - in the 1st verse i feel like u need to add few words between the lines here and there to make it sound better than that...and i like the melody in the hook ...nana nanan nana tornado wasnt bad ..was aight...i feel somethin in his accent is he from the uk xd
cool song really guys 7.5/10

dont look:i like the delivery in this one flow was there as well...i like the concept of this song xd, dont you look in my girlfriend girlfriend xD ! i like this song! good job 8./10

i have to redownload it cuz the other songs were broken rofl , good job jay !

[Xray]

Oh damn I missed this, my bad, I'll download and feed this soon.