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In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » Apr 30th, '10, 22:56

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby DƎRDYPK » Apr 30th, '10, 23:08

that was dope bro :smoking:
I could feel it.....the 2nd verse was my favorite :worship:
the lyrics on here are nice & you flowed them well :y:
the chorus was pretty dope too....this was well worth checking & i'll be sure to check it again :8)
i gotta go though cause my girl coming over ;)
peace bro :wave:
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » Apr 30th, '10, 23:31

DerdyPK wrote:that was dope bro :smoking:
I could feel it.....the 2nd verse was my favorite :worship:
the lyrics on here are nice & you flowed them well :y:
the chorus was pretty dope too....this was well worth checking & i'll be sure to check it again :8)
i gotta go though cause my girl coming over ;)
peace bro :wave:


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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Emadyville » May 1st, '10, 00:27

Lyrics were dope, delivery was dope as fuck, flow was good on the 2nd/3rd verse but the first got shaky at times. I liked the concept, I think a slower hook would be better, but the hooks def wasn't bad. I enjoyed it, I think you've done a lot better tho, everyone was good on this just that first verse at times and the hook, I really loved that bridge btw and the JaMarcuss Russell line too :y:
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 1st, '10, 00:29

Emadyville wrote:Lyrics were dope, delivery was dope as fuck, flow was good on the 2nd/3rd verse but the first got shaky at times. I liked the concept, I think a slower hook would be better, but the hooks def wasn't bad. I enjoyed it, I think you've done a lot better tho, everyone was good on this just that first verse at times and the hook, I really loved that bridge btw and the JaMarcuss Russell line too :y:


thx bro hahaha about time someone comment on the russell line...i think it was my cleverest wordplay in the song

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so I can bust harder than JaMarcus Russ"
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby JBM » May 1st, '10, 00:41

You are really good at doing emotional tracks.
The lyrics were great.
Flow got better later in the song.
Nice song.

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 1st, '10, 09:40

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby JBM » May 1st, '10, 10:23

Np, return the feed if you get a chance.
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 1st, '10, 18:41

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Le Tunisien » May 1st, '10, 19:07

hmm i liked this flow...you delivery was there...lyrics were nice and my 2nd verse is my fav,but i honestly didnt feel the hook...overall it was enjoyable,definetly worthed checking
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 1st, '10, 23:57

le tunisien wrote:hmm i liked this flow...you delivery was there...lyrics were nice and my 2nd verse is my fav,but i honestly didnt feel the hook...overall it was enjoyable,definetly worthed checking

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 2nd, '10, 18:55

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby gutawafang » May 3rd, '10, 03:26

Very very good. Flow, lyrics, good beat. I like second verse the most. :y:
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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 3rd, '10, 05:16

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Re: In My Dreams

Postby Tash8 » May 3rd, '10, 17:07

Tash8 wrote:bump
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