C-Riz w/ Hayley Williams - Airplanes (Remix-16Bars)

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 3rd, '10, 12:13

well its time i guess...dropped a quick 16 on this with Hayley on the hook
thanks to matz for the instrumental with hook :y:

all copyright goes to Grand Hustle and Paramore
..i think anywayz
here it is...
C-Riz w/ Hayley Williams - Airplanes (Remix)

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A wish long awaited but so far away
A wish constipated in the dawn of haze
A wish touchable for the eyes and lips
A wish for the kids a wish goes like swish
A wish remains a dream may come true
Your wish come true then I pray for you
A wish is a form like to paint a picture
A wish hold in take it save it in ya
A wish covered up treat it well
A wish comes back here to stay
A wish is a wish nothing more or less
Your wish is key don’t keep it for yourself
A wish expresses the things u want
A wish is key to the things u want
A wish is a wish nothing more or less
My wish is to be someone I don’t pretend

by **lil_bayly** » May 3rd, '10, 13:51

No offence dude but I didnt like it at all. The lyrics are boring and I am not sure if u have a strong accent but ur delivery was choppy at times. Nice try tho, keep it up!! :y:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 3rd, '10, 22:36

thanks bayly for the honesty...i sure will and suprise you next time :8)

hehe

and wow feed is rare....34views and one reply :shakehead:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 6th, '10, 22:34

by **classthe_king** » May 6th, '10, 22:41

This was alright. The flow was good for the most part but sometimes I felt as if you ended the line too early. I didn't like the rhyming at all, half of it didn't even sound like it rhymed. Subject matter and lyricism was good though

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 6th, '10, 22:44

thank you man..

by **Tash8** » May 6th, '10, 23:24

flow was good lyrics were aite... but you didn't rhyme in this line

A wish covered up treat it well
A wish comes back here to stay

umm delivery was one of ur best...i liked it but u gotta just tighten up the accent real quick..u can have an accent but u still need pronounce every letter.

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 7th, '10, 20:30

aite thanks :y:

by **hype** » May 8th, '10, 18:21

could you post a download link for the whole song with the chorus, but no verses? an instrumental if you will.

by **classthe_king** » May 8th, '10, 18:31

hype wrote:could you post a download link for the whole song with the chorus, but no verses? an instrumental if you will.

It's in the dl section

by **Slim Zaddy** » May 9th, '10, 22:32

lyrics were aight ,,,your flow was good at some and average at some lines ,, i liked ya delivery ,, overall , it was alright ,,,,, keeep doin ya staff, bro ,,, you're getting better