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Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

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Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » May 8th, '10, 03:21

Listen/Download link - http://usershare.net/hfcpunqlfjvx


Lyrics --

Chorus

Verse 1
This life, is just a moment of time
On a bigger scale, a time frame of mankind

Are you gonna fail, or leave a legacy behind?
Lemme put that question in your mind, get up a climb

Its runnin out quick so homie I stay on my grind
When I flow and spit for the Lord I'm an instrument

...I must admit, that all my sin was hard to kick
But when I came to grips Jesus gave me a starter kit

...I must admit, that all my sin was hard to kick
But when I came to grips Jesus gave me a starter kit

He gave me all my gifts, no goal is too hard to hit
...Make sure that your missed because your life is only just a


Chorus


Verse 2
Take a look up at your clock the seconds go tick-tock
So you gotta grab the time, I'm not rhymin so that I'm hot

...He put me in my prime so I gotta glorify my God
When your dream is up in the sky, are you gonna stop?

(NOO) you gotta go n fly then grab it n neva drop
When your circumstance is heavy you gotta stand on the rock

...Are you ready? Cuz he will give you wings
But they'll get cut off by the machetti if you try to live in sin

...If everything is gone, my joy is not gonna end
I'm not gonna run away from the bomb, cuz God is at my side

...You say lifes long before you know it your gonna die
..Time will keep on going on but without Christ your life will fry




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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby Enimee » May 8th, '10, 03:34

very well produced, i liked the flow alot too i mean it was pretty much flawless lyrics were on point it was a pretty good track overall for sure man def would love to hear more shit like this
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby Tash8 » May 8th, '10, 03:48

i like the chorus a lot...the beat kinda annoys me with the snare delay effect...it kinda ruins the verses..i felt the second verse had a betterf low for the beat but you also fell off in the first bar soo...work on that i like when u flow fast like the last lines...overall not bad, def not bad enjoyable

anyways please hit me up wtih feed on In My Dreams.
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 8th, '10, 10:26

without the quality lack it would be a great track
i thought the delivery was solid...flows were both delivered well
maybe your pronouncation was a bit hard to grasp..at least for me..but i myself cant knock nobody at pronouncation when everybody knocks me at pronouncation but thats another topic :y:
nice track overalll...
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby Xray » May 8th, '10, 12:13

Sounds like some Disney shit.

...I must admit, that all my sin was hard to kick
But when I came to grips Jesus gave me a starter kit

This part just killed it for me. I mean you got an average ass hook, on a average beat, with some homo sounding lyrics. Plus your voice doesn't help either...
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby Tash8 » May 8th, '10, 17:51

Xray wrote:Sounds like some Disney shit.

...I must admit, that all my sin was hard to kick
But when I came to grips Jesus gave me a starter kit

This part just killed it for me. I mean you got an average ass hook, on a average beat, with some homo sounding lyrics. Plus your voice doesn't help either...


:laughing: :laughing: well at least you say it how it is.
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby hype » May 8th, '10, 18:17

i thought that was actually great.
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Re: Moment In Time [With Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » May 8th, '10, 19:12

Thanks for the feed everyone! I understand this isn't going to be the style a lot of you people like since its Christian rap but its all good thanks anyways for the feed!

@Tash I'll check your track tonight when I'm home
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