I'm Sorry

[MC Anonymous]

http://usershare.net/uz4t6fsksd8e

LYRICS:

I'm sorry for dishonor, sorry to my momma, promise,
tell me when I am a father, people will know i am honest
honorable person, who knows of nothing aggressive
without words of discontention, defection, or lessened mentions
You're what I need and want, and I'm sorry we streamed apart
and I'm sorry my steaming heart, rejected your seeping heart
Just don't leave me in the dark, please, family so stand with me
Disregard the foolish vanity, I know you're mad at me
sorry for the apathy, carelessness and the tragedy
You're willing to throw away a tapestry that you had with me?
For what? I'm terrible, I know it, I don't have to see
violence in your soul, to know that I'm a rotten seed
and look at where my foolish arrogance has gotten me
Nothing but my sister running away in forgotten seas
love you, your my everything, everything I could ever be
I just want you back with me, for all eternity

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

Every day that goes by, nothing changes but apologies
Your lies are just a mockery, I'm sorry but they bother me
How am I supposed to know what's fake and what's reality
Everything you say to me is prying at my sanity
fake my happiness, and hide from people who are loving me
greatest actors are the people forced to by the public, see...
I don't even know what's me, or what I should be open too
even if I spoke to you, nothing is real emotional
What am I supposed to do, What am I supposed to feel
Who am I supposed to go to when I don't know what is real
I can hide inside like introspective thoughts, and fade away
Or take this game and play, and cry the pain away like every day
I eat myself alive, knowing that I only have
Me inside this lonely path, to walk on, time has slowly passed
I'm sorry for the insecurities I may have caused
The only thing I have, is bended knees to pray to God

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

[DƎRDYPK]

Very deep & dope bro
you keep getting better & better
tracks smoothly mixed & very enjoyable

[Kez]

The beat is nice shit, i think i heard it somewhere when i was browsing Soundclick and was gonna use it, but nothing materialised lol.
Your flow is pretty much flawless throughout; i think though in future perhaps some of your songs could switch it up a bit, i know this flow is "perfect" per se but sometimes it sounds repetitive when you consider the back catalogue. For this track though it fits really really well with the beat so i love it.
The lyrics are great, i love shit like this, and there are some great lines here. The rhyming is solid as always, and the concept is deep shit, so i'm bound to like it haha.
Quality sounds alright to me but i can hear a couple crackles and shit which some people will probably complain about but sounds fine to me.
Your delivery is suitable for the track which is a good thing, shows you can do deep songs without just sounding the same as on the normal like, horrorcore boastful type shit.

So overall yeah i liked the track haha

[MC Anonymous]

Thanks dudes!

[gutawafang]

It's my cup of tea. This is as good as Goodbye Present or even better. The lyrics/multis so powerful and it doesn't sway from the topic.

Chorus is very good too. Cool beat to flow to.

[Enimee]

yo the production value on this peace is insane great fuckin work, harcore instrumental for sure and dope as lyrics to go with it i mean all around i give it a 10 u flowed on point and u had somethin to say worth hearin idk just a reall dope track all around congrats

[MC Anonymous]

[Tash8]

okk so your flow is really constant but it's also really choppy, it's not smooth...
lyrics are cool..delivery needs work, you sound like your whining, sounds a bit annoying...

but yo...i'm really nitpicking, this is a good song, but i'm sure you dont want me to suck up to you