Bar & C-Riz - Hold On

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well c-riz was suppose to post it but guess he forgot lol

Bar & C-Riz - Hold On
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCnp1rwHcIM


feedback appreciated

side note - snow'd in at the bar, the collaboration mixtape is out on satarday, will be up for download on sunday, so look out for it, once i release this ill be back on giving feedback for everyone and shit just been busy getting this done and organizing the release party and stuff. i go over some beats ive never attempted before so will be great to hear what people think

[SXu2NT]

unique , i'm feelin it.

you get thumbs up =D

the beat is dope

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

woops
enjoy people

[Tash8]

good song

bar-- i felt you were kinda not putting your whole voice into it...like u were whispering really loudly..just have to put more into it..sides that good verse

c-riz-nice flow, u had it on the lock besides maybe one slip up...umm you too were kinda whispering..albeit angrily whispering. but also a good verse

nice job guys

[Tornado]

Didn't really get into the track or either of your lyrics, both your verses were solid, Bar especially had some nice lines, C-Riz i think only slipped up once and i know this beat is something different to the regular but wasn't really feeling the track at all

[Mr. Chambers]

ok bar...your delivery was kinda meh on here.....it was kidna boring and bland...same with the lyrics...they were alright...but nothing mind blowing...your accent is SUPER heavy.....so for your american listeners.....they kinda really have to pay attention to what your saying to even get the meaning........

c-riz...to me your flow was choppy....it was kinda just all the over the place and i feel it can be tightened up some..lyrics were kinda below average...but your delivery was much better then bar's

beat was really nice....tho not really my cup of tea...

[classthe_king]

Bar, I really liked your verse. Your delivery was really clear and I could actually understand what you were saying lol. Either that or you got better quality. Lyrics were good too.

Criz, really diggin the flow on this one. Made the song interesting and for being different I think you pulled it off. Lyrics were good, nothing REALLY good but they weren't bad.