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Tornado: Raw (Preview)

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Tornado: Raw (Preview)

Postby Tornado » May 18th, '10, 13:15

Artist: Tornado
Track Name: Raw
Produced & Mixed by: Tornado
Link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... tent=music

Description: An underground insipred dark track which i'm just using to test out my skills.Nothing deep or personal here, just raw hip-hop stripped down

Lyrics:

Raw rap is back, my tactics to attack this
are simple mathematics when i go back at it
I'm back, my rap's rapid, half acts couldn't hack it
attack, smash the hatchet, and that is a rap kid
I obliterate, disintergatte but see, i don't discriminate
eliminate with killer state when i spit them iller takes
one take...can turn any emcee to nothing
just smoke the puffing, man here ain't bluffing
no dicussion or fussing, with ease i'll snuff him
see no fucking concussion, verbal murder, head gushing
my adrenaline rushing when i fend to be bussing
your fucking skull open, and i do it like nothing
yeh, it's treatchery, who's next to be? come step to me
i'll disconnect your head indeed, you best have a directory
to call emergency, i murder G's earnestly
no concern to me, blud i left em bled and burned indeed cause...


Feedback apperciated
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Re: Tornado: Raw (Preview)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 19th, '10, 10:57

flow was on and off....you had rhymes for days and tried to squeeze them inside a bar but the flow suffered from it...even if its not the "ideal imagination of being lyrical"...do more bars with them rhymes you got instead forcing them all into the shortest amount of bars...get what i mean?
anywayz....your pronouncation wasnt appealing to me...but its just me...im not hatin but cant get along with the UK thing that much....
mixing was far from good lol...
and uh...preview of what :shifty: new tape on the way...
i Saw it coming All Around The World (see what i did there :o )....nah seriously what happened wit those tracks
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Re: Tornado: Raw (Preview)

Postby Tornado » May 22nd, '10, 14:26

Shit, i'll get to you on MSN about that. Thanks for the feedback though. And as for the tape, there no point hyping shit about it cos it ain't done yet , when it's done, it gets released.
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