You know what, fuck a feature, if you checked out the old verison. this one is re-done better. No lyrics cos it's clear enough unless there's a huge demand for it and anway not a lot of you check my shit anyway. First song bullshit for the Black Storm tape, standard bullshit.
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Track: On The Edge
Artist: Tornado
Produced by: Shadowville
Mixed by: Tornado
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Tornado: On the Edge
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by Tornado » Jun 3rd, '10, 10:57
you guys suck at giving feed nowadays.
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by Xray » Jun 3rd, '10, 11:21
Nice motherfucking beat man, amazing shit. o_o
Amazing mixing. I fucking love how the vocals sounding. Man the flow is dope, the delivery is dope, lyrics are nice as fuck. Only thing I have to criticize is your pronunciation. I don't mean get rid of your accent no, your accent is fine. But every rapper goes through pronunciation problems and I think you could use some work in that area to deliver your tracks more. Crazy fucking track though, only that one thing to fault. Fuck you for finding such a dope fucking beat, damn...I need shit like this.
This track has a nice 90's feel to it. Really like it. You know what...fuck the pronunciation...downloaded.
Amazing mixing. I fucking love how the vocals sounding. Man the flow is dope, the delivery is dope, lyrics are nice as fuck. Only thing I have to criticize is your pronunciation. I don't mean get rid of your accent no, your accent is fine. But every rapper goes through pronunciation problems and I think you could use some work in that area to deliver your tracks more. Crazy fucking track though, only that one thing to fault. Fuck you for finding such a dope fucking beat, damn...I need shit like this.
This track has a nice 90's feel to it. Really like it. You know what...fuck the pronunciation...downloaded.
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by Xray » Jun 4th, '10, 06:15
Bump straight from the slums of shaolin.
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by B.A.D. » Jun 4th, '10, 23:40
damn, nice beat
Its a bit hard to understand the accent but Its not impossible, you just have to pay extra attention, which is good. I like the flow, the underground vibe, the way you connect with the beat itself, no hook?. damn, i think I could maybe do some tight on here.
the second verse it a lil harder to understand, but of what I get the lyrics are sick.
the third verse was my favourite...
plus good ass mixing. good stuff.
things to improve on?.. hmm.. not much, maybe try switiching up flows everynow and then and add a couple extra stuff to make it more interesting.
but overall:
I love it, great track.
Its a bit hard to understand the accent but Its not impossible, you just have to pay extra attention, which is good. I like the flow, the underground vibe, the way you connect with the beat itself, no hook?. damn, i think I could maybe do some tight on here.
the second verse it a lil harder to understand, but of what I get the lyrics are sick.
the third verse was my favourite...
plus good ass mixing. good stuff.
things to improve on?.. hmm.. not much, maybe try switiching up flows everynow and then and add a couple extra stuff to make it more interesting.
but overall:
I love it, great track.
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by Tornado » Jun 7th, '10, 11:46
safe Ax, i thought fuck a hook after no=one responded to the offer but glad ya'll liked it. keep it coming people
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Re: Tornado: On the Edge
by Mr. Chambers » Jun 7th, '10, 19:25
this was a pretty decent...i loved this beat...i used it like 3 years ago....shit is solid....
uhm..flow was shakey...but i liked it becuz it gave a real grimy "i don't give a fuck" vibe....
lyrics were REAL hard to understand..your accent is just so dam thick.....but they was good.....at times is was just impossible to understand becuz it sounded like you were eating like a big ball of gum and spitting your verse while it was still in there..just real muffled
overall tho a solid song....
uhm..flow was shakey...but i liked it becuz it gave a real grimy "i don't give a fuck" vibe....
lyrics were REAL hard to understand..your accent is just so dam thick.....but they was good.....at times is was just impossible to understand becuz it sounded like you were eating like a big ball of gum and spitting your verse while it was still in there..just real muffled
overall tho a solid song....
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