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REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

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REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 1st, '10, 00:15

understand this as you want,
feeds appreciated :y:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7674018415121e9d/
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[Verse1]:

man i be what i wanna be so dont stop me
i copy no one but myself,i get cocky
its probably cuz you drop me and you block me
you underrate me you hate me,i go crazy
so save me cuz im canibal you wont face me
cuz you aint got a face no more
i dont want to race no whore
and rap is a game but ill play it by myself
its a shame to get help,so i stay and rebell
so spell my name cuz i dwell and i aim
for the wealth and the fame,nah fuck that
that aint why i ever got on this rap
this is not my goal in gettin in this trap
but im strapped thats a fact
now i wish i'd go back,but nobody knows that
i feel so wack,so small, where to grow at
but i stand tall,wont crawl,imma show,act
like owh i am so stacked!

[Chorus]:

no,i would never try to act
like i know cuz i'd just cry infact
fore go i'll slap ya with a rhyme attack
then i'll hope that i wont be the crime suspect

oh my consciouness is stoppin me
see,its like i wanna cop a plea
but i dont,cuz i just see the hot in me
my energy fadin cuz i got ennemies

[Verse2]:

im better than c riz,you aint clever to see this
no matter who you be with,i would never flee a diss
cuz i speak what i wanna speak
im "weak"? then im gonna treat
y'all bein raw,what the fuck do you know
bout gettin stuck with a ball
askin for who you would pass
and who you could slash
and with who you should laugh
is it good to bring the past
and think of asses you harrassed
the past and just the passion
of passin then fuckin bashin
and i'll forever say im clever
how we stop and rap toghether
.....then later we discover
gettin haters cuz we brothers
but that made us like no others
ask me ...im big Ax D
ask him ...hes big Tuni
we forgot about the beef
and we got to not deceive
we put a plot,its hot believe
...us!and we know you goin nuts
hoe you know we'r blowin just
your motherfucking little mind
with a riddle cuz ur kind
needs a middle from behind

[Chorus]:

no,i would never try to act
like i know cuz i'd just cry infact
fore go i'll slap ya with a rhyme attack
then i'll hope that i wont be the crime suspect

oh my consciouness is stoppin me
see,its like i wanna cop a plea
but i dont,cuz i just see the hot in me
my energy fadin cuz i got ennemies
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby gutawafang » Jun 1st, '10, 02:00

I thought I heard this on your facebook page. It's cool man. :y: Chorus lyrics can be better though. :)
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 1st, '10, 02:34

The beat is HOT!!! Pronounciation could be better. Lyrics are dope though.

P.S. I want this beat ;)
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 1st, '10, 08:05

gutawafang wrote:I thought I heard this on your facebook page. It's cool man. :y: Chorus lyrics can be better though. :)

thanks man :p :happy: and oh i have a new song comming soon
ChronicJon wrote:The beat is HOT!!! Pronounciation could be better. Lyrics are dope though.

P.S. I want this beat ;)

i can send you it ;) and thanks though!
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 1st, '10, 08:11

Thanks I would appreciate it if you could send me it :8)

Seriously, this beat is on some Ambitionz Az A Ridah shit!!!!
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 7th, '10, 13:39

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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 7th, '10, 21:35

Mixing is absolute dog shit. Lyrics sometimes made no sense and you had way to many forced mutlies. Delivery sounded like you spit with a tin can inside of your voice box. Flow was good except for the spots where you tried to force it to be on beat. Beat was the only thing good about this whole song.

3/10
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 7th, '10, 21:41

MC Anonymous wrote:Mixing is absolute dog shit. Lyrics sometimes made no sense and you had way to many forced mutlies. Delivery sounded like you spit with a tin can inside of your voice box. Flow was good except for the spots where you tried to force it to be on beat. Beat was the only thing good about this whole song.

3/10
watch your language mc ann,learn how to talk properly before feeding
and there is no way in hell this is a 3/10..you must be out of your mind ,and have a wrong idea about yourself :y:
oh,and thanks for leaving a comment ,cuz i never leave comments when i rarely listen to your songs :y: :y: :y:
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 7th, '10, 21:44

le tunisien wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Mixing is absolute dog shit. Lyrics sometimes made no sense and you had way to many forced mutlies. Delivery sounded like you spit with a tin can inside of your voice box. Flow was good except for the spots where you tried to force it to be on beat. Beat was the only thing good about this whole song.

3/10
watch your language mc ann,learn how to talk properly before feeding
and there is no way in hell this is a 3/10..you must be out of your mind ,and have a wrong idea about yourself :y:
oh,and thanks for leaving a comment ,cuz i never leave comments when i rarely listen to your songs :y: :y: :y:

Take it or leave it as you want. All the real music heads know the truth but are too sensitive to say it. I, on the other hand, tell people how it is. You can't take it; oh well. I could care less.

3/10 is being generous, by the way. '':y:''
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Re: REDZEK - GOT ENEMIES

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 9th, '10, 00:12

MC Anonymous wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Mixing is absolute dog shit. Lyrics sometimes made no sense and you had way to many forced mutlies. Delivery sounded like you spit with a tin can inside of your voice box. Flow was good except for the spots where you tried to force it to be on beat. Beat was the only thing good about this whole song.

3/10
watch your language mc ann,learn how to talk properly before feeding
and there is no way in hell this is a 3/10..you must be out of your mind ,and have a wrong idea about yourself :y:
oh,and thanks for leaving a comment ,cuz i never leave comments when i rarely listen to your songs :y: :y: :y:

Take it or leave it as you want. All the real music heads know the truth but are too sensitive to say it. I, on the other hand, tell people how it is. You can't take it; oh well. I could care less.

3/10 is being generous, by the way. '':y:''

lol .. :n:
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