JBM - Airplanes MIX
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JBM - Airplanes MIX
by JBM » Jun 4th, '10, 08:19
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Re: JBM - Airplanes MIX
by gutawafang » Jun 4th, '10, 09:42
LOL at the TAGS!!! 
the flow is ok. not bad man.
good storytelling.
good overall. "hand in mine" line, nice.
the flow is ok. not bad man.
good storytelling.
good overall. "hand in mine" line, nice.
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Re: JBM - Airplanes MIX
by B.A.D. » Jun 4th, '10, 23:57
you gotta fix the flow, its too harsh, gotta go smooth with the beat.
I like the lyrics, the storytelling is nice, maybe pack it up with a bit more stuff to make it more entertaing, but its good. just fix up the flow and add overlays to give it a lil more power.
keep at it
I like the lyrics, the storytelling is nice, maybe pack it up with a bit more stuff to make it more entertaing, but its good. just fix up the flow and add overlays to give it a lil more power.
keep at it
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Re: JBM - Airplanes MIX
by autotooner » Jun 13th, '10, 23:27
listenin now. sounds pretty good. where'd you find the instrumental at?
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