i know yur excited for recovery an everything.. but

by **tjb** » Jun 7th, '10, 22:36

listen up anyway!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FedZH4wuUQA

feedback is appreciated

by **gutawafang** » Jul 1st, '10, 03:56

It's not a freestyle. :coffee:

It sounds like mumbling. :n:

but the lyrics are pretty ok for the beat. :y:

by **Robbie G** » Jul 2nd, '10, 02:04

Gotta show more emotion, especially on such an angry beat. :y:

by **tjb** » Jul 3rd, '10, 01:29

gutawafang wrote:It's not a freestyle.

It sounds like mumbling. but the lyrics are pretty ok for the beat.

haha i know its not a freestyle.. but its not a song either so i didnt know what to call it
and about the mumbling. i dont have an acoustically dead place to record in so if i boost the vocals
you hear white noise, espcially recording just with audacity :happy:

by **tjb** » Jul 3rd, '10, 01:39

Robbie G wrote:Gotta show more emotion, especially on such an angry beat.

i agree. this was only the third time ive ever recorded eva, im tryna really boost my skills as far as rapping out what i wright and really getting it to flow with the beats i choose.

Website · by **Solace** » Jul 3rd, '10, 06:05

You have to learn not to just speak. But you had your flow...You got to be louder. When you listen to a song the person isnt talking, which is what you did, he/she raps. Emotion. Yell that shit, shout it. Let the listener actually feel your words.

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