MC Cubz - Air, Fire, Earth, Water + VIDEO!!

[Mc Cubz]

http://rapidshare.com/files/397132641/M ... r.mp3.html

VIDEO = http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SoUATfxmszw

phonecall:
[I'm tapped in the head bcos I’ve been stamped left for dead
back for revenge like lets pretend to be his bestest friend]

see air makes the fire burn hot enough to dry the earth
cold needing water pureness that’s how the cycle works

…bloods crips, ying yang, but they would have lived the same
with the love entangled hate spun by twists of fate,
all in vain the pain, I say it’s time to change,
as a society, I can’t hear

another mother’s cries again, insaine..
…….have you ever thought deeper in the mind
……like these world-wide ways need change
the tears have rose the sea- and she keep coming like the tides

by the same rain he begins a mission with a flame
then a crossing of the line between the loving and him
In games with satan…. playing fate, like russian-roulette
- look who’s left then fire again

[classthe_king]

I thought this was pretty good. Flow was on point most of the time but sometimes it seemed like you rushed it a little bit. Delivery was pretty good too. Only thing that I think needs improvement are the lyrics. But keep it up

[B.A.D.]

cubz!!!!! daymn u still alive

please upload to usershare!!! cuz stupid rapidshare keeps freezing on me. I want to listen to this

[Mc Cubz]

cubz!!!!! daymn u still alive

Ye still alive mate!

please upload to usershare!!! cuz stupid rapidshare keeps freezing on me. I want to listen to this

I can't get usershare to work, is this ok?
http://www.zshare.net/audio/770799504581fa8d/

[Mc Cubz]

I thought this was pretty good. Flow was on point most of the time but sometimes it seemed like you rushed it a little bit. Delivery was pretty good too. Only thing that I think needs improvement are the lyrics. But keep it up

Thank's for the feedback. I guess it's just more a uk thing to rap to a faster pace - the recorded version hit the beat like I wanted it to when I wrote it - I just write in a more complex way than to use a multi-rhyme at the end of each bar fearing anything else would be off-beat/off-flow.

I'm surprised you said the lyrics need improvement - I thought they were quite deep, full of imagery and explored the concept of air, fire, earth and water - so I posted up the lyrics for you to reconsider.

[B.A.D.]

you've always had a diferent way of rhyming and structuring, like if you only look at the lyrics you might be like Hmm , but the way you perform them makes it sound good

its a shame that after youre long time hiatus you only give us 16 bars hahaha, I liked it never-the-less.

extremely good methaphor overall.

mixing needs work, beat was a good choice, overall its pretti good

[Mr. Chambers]

I thought this was pretty good. Flow was on point most of the time but sometimes it seemed like you rushed it a little bit. Delivery was pretty good too. Only thing that I think needs improvement are the lyrics. But keep it up

Thank's for the feedback. I guess it's just more a uk thing to rap to a faster pace - the recorded version hit the beat like I wanted it to when I wrote it - I just write in a more complex way than to use a multi-rhyme at the end of each bar fearing anything else would be off-beat/off-flow.

I'm surprised you said the lyrics need improvement - I thought they were quite deep, full of imagery and explored the concept of air, fire, earth and water - so I posted up the lyrics for you to reconsider.

well your set......you got quite a good opinion on yourself so no need to be posting here for feedback!


no but seriously.....thats his opinion...if your gonna debate about it...no need to post it up for feedback...i'll feed nevertheless

song was decent.....just the pure fact your first 2 bars used the word "bestest" and then in this say "I just write in a more complex way than to use a multi-rhyme at the end of each bar fearing anything else would be off-beat/off-flow." is just funny......
i ain't a fan of this type of rhyming pattern....but its whatever floats your boat.....tbh the metaphor was nice.....flow was choppy at times...you would rush it....i heard it on multiple occasions...and no it wasn't cuz it was a "Faster" paced flow......lyrics were good.....the vocab is pretty good...thats what makes it as good as it is......

[Mc Cubz]

Well, what will be will be - I stand by what I said and I expect you will stand by what you said.

Thank you for giving me your feedback - I do appreciate it!