Mister Big Bad Wolf (Produced by 2deep)

[Mr. Chambers]

First Actual Single from "Suck It Bitch Vol. II"

http://www.hotshare.net/en/audio/263109-8337908f1b.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PQpkD-qum4

{Verse 1}
they told me pain is weakness leavin the body//
in that case then i'm bleedin then prolly//
even insomnia couldn't keep me to rest//
fuck yea i'm confident...any kats an easy contest//
when i handle what you failed to dismantle the panel of geeks//
turn to vandels and theifs...and canibals....see//
these nerds on lebron tips..act like you rule//
its what you get when you raise cavs(calfs) into bulls//
keep thinking rappin is cool//
i'll be the one to put your tracks on parole...for acting a fool//
maximum sentence out of your mouth...........one//
chambers is king.......who you tryna bout son?//
this is vadar and luke....you'll see for yaself//
cuz to pull out the win..well.....your needin my help//
you can mention my name....help ya freestyles sell//
i'll spit fire all around ya......breathin in hell//

[Chorus] X2
i really dunno why you put me down//
mister big bad wolf till i get around you//
look...they all so pussy now//
you mister gangsta gangsta and i bet you loud too//

{Verse 2}
you have no right to see me in light//
please....anything you say i'm readin it light//
you can block me out woman....right....see ya good bye//
cuz you'll just be another bitch leavin my life//
i might seem impolite......even if i'm//
seemingly like you portraying me as//
i'm takin the tracks...the one thats leadin to high roads//
even if i close my eyes i'm seeing the sky's dome//
i'ma low life...thats appalling to me//
only proving that the apple don't fall far from the tree//
keep thinkin your hurtin me when you talk to your sisters//
please.........you seem to forget my audience bigger//
haha.....nah.........i ain't never coming back//
fuck the bullshit..fuck the trash....fuck the fact....fuck the past//
fuck the feelings...fuck what we ever fuckin had//
you can stop fuckin callin and give me back my fuckin cash//

{Verse 3}
why you actin a fool for//
i'ma net geek attraction....attackin for whole wars//
look kid...after this verse....honor your fate//
your orgins of name's cuz your persona is fake//
another home made bitch.....no name kid//
tryna be the next great white when his flow made with//
another eminem attitude....nah we don't need it//
if you think you reachin my standards.......so meet it//
a few screws loose....gets you failure in end//
your an aggressive nerd....i'll hit the nail on the head//
but your hyping yourself up as iller then death//
when you more like a fever or an ailment instead//
you never gonna be what your hyping yourself//
your CD title.....maybe........findin the shelf//
don't believe with the hate....with the war on the brink//
but fa real.....cuz i really know more then you think//

[B.A.D.]

fuck I have to re-type everything again cuz stupid trshady logged me out in when I submited. smFh

I said the the mixing keeps getting better, this one is not too dry and not too wet, volumes are almost perfect, maybe the beat was a bit too loud or vocals too low, not that much tho. but overall great clean and sweet mixing, what program u use again?... from what I've heard this is probably the closest you can get to studio quality without actually being in one.

About the song, the flow is great throughout most of the song, but like in the "Loser" track, you have a bit of trouble when changing the speed and the syllables per bar. for ex.
these nerds on lebron tips..act like you rule//
its what you get when you raise cavs(calfs) into bulls//
ya know what I mean?.. lol, maybe that I can tell you on msn if dont understand what Im trying to say hahaha.

the lyrics are great great, I love it, what its good from you is that you can do the multi's and vocab really well, but your strong point is the metaphoric and the nameplays haha. one thing about that tho', you maybe got a put a name into the picture, beacuse I know this ain't "random" punchlines, you know?, Its easier for me to figure out the target hahaha, but many people wont. either way thats up to you cuz sublims are an art too haha.

delivery... its great, but its still the same.

now, I need to hand in a big BRAVO , the hook man.... greatness, the best flow on the track, I enjoyed that shit too much. great great great. *nods head*

good first single, the tape looks extremely promising now haha, hope you keep it at this level, although try to vary a bit more on concepts n shit, I think you'll sound good on an experimental concept track ya know?

good choice for the beat too.

overall, my fav verses where 1 and 3, the second I wasnt feeling too much, the hook is great, mixing is almost there like I said, so keep at it. Not a lot of dudes in here make good stuff so thats why I barely come into tr anymore lol, but its good to see good stuff still up here.

[gutawafang]

Thanks, Chambers. This is inspiring to me.

[Mr. Chambers]

^no problem glad i can inspire you

[*MIRANDA*]

this song is fucking badass
the chorus is extremly catchy
u did an amazing job babe *turns volume up*

[Mr. Chambers]

^thank you...youtube link added

[BILI]

Damn homie,this was fuckin dope,hook is just
Verses were tight 2 ,nice job,and I like that beat

[Solace]

Verses are fucking flame..But I gotta say this has to be your best hook yet. Your quality is really good, and the mixing is perfect. Great track, I think I'm real pumped on Vol 2.

[MC Anonymous]

Damn....

This took me by SURPRISE!

First off, the mixing is fantastic. Incredible clarity, something that a lot of these rappers on TR lack. (I'm jealous) Only problem I see with it is that the track is too..quiet. Sounded a bit mellow, maybe if you raised the mastering volume it would be better.

Every verse was fire, yet they all had one main little deficiency. Your flow/syllable placement made it so that you would speed up a little bit to make it hit the measure. Now, normally that wouldn't bother me, but because of the beat and the way your delivery is, it has to be consistent. It's only a little minor flaw to an otherwise perfect triplet of verses. I liked the rhyme scheme, complex yet simplistic.

The hook was surprisingly really good. I have no complaints about it at all.

The ablibs were annoying to me, kind of distracted from the brilliance of the track.

Excellent song! 9/10. I'll be sure to feed any other material you drop from now on. *downloads

[classthe_king]

This song was great in every way Can't wait for your tape

[Liquid_Fangs]

Wow You are way better than me

[Mr. Chambers]

i'ma a werewolf.....

[j3andit]

sup first time really peepin your stuff...but dude is REALLY dope...it's very smooth, and mixing was done pretty well as well..

swagger on this is dooope. fam your shit is tight man, keep grindin..I can only see you evalate from this

if you could please return the feedback, I'd really appreciate it man:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=89443


overall 9/10 beat was dope, chorus was catchy and the verses were really well done. dope drop bro.

[Mr. Chambers]

bump!

[Tranquil]

wow, now im really hyped for Suck it Bitch Vol. 2 this was seriously dope man, cant wait to here more from you