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BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby BILI » Jun 10th, '10, 19:48

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5S4irPcUF0
Any feed would be really appreciated :y:
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby solara » Jun 10th, '10, 20:27

yeah well da melody is cool..i love it..
bt u can't approach it differently..drums-wise ?
da tempo aint that cool bro.. like too much for this melody
try smthing quick and light to fit it..
bt its good though..
keep it up
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby BILI » Jun 10th, '10, 20:56

solara wrote:yeah well da melody is cool..i love it..
bt u can't approach it differently..drums-wise ?
da tempo aint that cool bro.. like too much for this melody
try smthing quick and light to fit it..
bt its good though..
keep it up

Thx a lot,I just downloaded FL few hours ago and this is my first beat :happy:
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby solara » Jun 10th, '10, 22:17

artistic approach.. just try to listen to patterns..utube tutorials wud help
a producer's skills are mainly his drums.. and da way he samples shit..
thats why dj khalil is heavy..yfeel me ?
all is good..work on crazy tempos and we collaborating :)
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby BILI » Jun 10th, '10, 22:26

solara wrote:artistic approach.. just try to listen to patterns..utube tutorials wud help
a producer's skills are mainly his drums.. and da way he samples shit..
thats why dj khalil is heavy..yfeel me ?
all is good..work on crazy tempos and we collaborating :)
peace..

Thx man,yeah I was just watchin some stuff on youtube,it helps a lot,I`ll study it some more for some time and then have my 2nd attempt,peace man :y:
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby Noeezy » Jun 11th, '10, 05:56

Pretty good for a first beat, I liked the melody but the beat sounds like it's going too fast imo. Maybe change tempo to around 90 and see what happens. I liked it either way tho, I'm jus startin to get back into making beats too so I know it takes time to learn everything, but keep goin' cause this is a good start :y:
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby gutawafang » Jun 11th, '10, 06:05

hahahahaha. It's the kind of music you play when you do sex. It's very good man. Though it's a little too simple. HAHAHAHA. :happy:
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby BILI » Jun 11th, '10, 09:50

Thx both of you :worship:

I just added some packs to my FL studio,cause before it only had simple ones.
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 11th, '10, 13:02

yo i ain't tryna be a dick....but these beats yall posting in here need to go to the producers corner...

but

beat isn't bad...that piano sounds really corny.....that bass tho is a nice touch tho.....you can tell your new....becuz you put a bouncy clap in on what was suppose to be a darker beat....i think the tempo needs changed....

with that being said...not terrible for a first beat.
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Re: BILI-Time To Go(Beat)

Postby BILI » Jun 11th, '10, 14:29

chambers wrote:yo i ain't tryna be a dick....but these beats yall posting in here need to go to the producers corner...

but

beat isn't bad...that piano sounds really corny.....that bass tho is a nice touch tho.....you can tell your new....becuz you put a bouncy clap in on what was suppose to be a darker beat....i think the tempo needs changed....

with that being said...not terrible for a first beat.

thx man,appreciate it alot :worship:

But where˙s the producers corner? :unsure:
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