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Spiritual Rain

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 17th, '10, 19:27

http://usershare.net/g73xvwzk9w4v

Very personal song. Tell me what you think.
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby gvdz » Jun 17th, '10, 20:27

cant you upload it to another site?
it dont works for me
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 17th, '10, 21:10

gvdz wrote:cant you upload it to another site?
it dont works for me

http://www.zshare.net/audio/77338536774d7454/
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby j3andit » Jun 17th, '10, 21:38

beat is decent..

delivery sounds REALLY forced...
lyrics are super dope
quality could be upped
mixing between verses and hook was done well

just not feelin how this was spit, it flowed decent, but the emotion was off.

pretty decent song though :y:
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 17th, '10, 22:41

j3andit wrote:beat is decent..

delivery sounds REALLY forced...
lyrics are super dope
quality could be upped
mixing between verses and hook was done well

just not feelin how this was spit, it flowed decent, but the emotion was off.

pretty decent song though :y:

Thanks for the feedback bro. :y:

Yeah, it's hard to spit with a shitty ass mic, so I have to project my voice louder than I would like too. :(
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby gvdz » Jun 17th, '10, 22:48

sounds dope
i like the beat :y:
do you make the beats by yourself?
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 17th, '10, 22:57

gvdz wrote:sounds dope
i like the beat :y:
do you make the beats by yourself?

I wish. I get mine from soundclick.
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 17th, '10, 23:45

really love it
my favorite track from you :worship:
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby j3andit » Jun 18th, '10, 04:50

MC Anonymous wrote:Thanks for the feedback bro. :y:

Yeah, it's hard to spit with a shitty ass mic, so I have to project my voice louder than I would like too. :(



yeah i figured it was a shitty mic, I have one too, plantronics headset mic..it was like 150$ like 4 years ago...so I figure its around a 30$ mic nowadays hahaha.

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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby classthe_king » Jun 18th, '10, 15:39

This song is very relateable
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby Pllumi » Jun 18th, '10, 23:05

awesome Anon, I keep bumbin' it :y:
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Re: Spiritual Rain

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Jun 23rd, '10, 00:12

While some said it felt rushed and it could've been, I think that's your style on a few of your other songs so I didn't find that too noticeable. This and Soliloquy are both good.
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