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Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

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Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 17:32

hey ya'll...track I did with a member on here, hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/77436103b6f4f2c5/
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http://limelinx.com/files/dbbc31aa61928 ... 9750ed8779

1st)Bandit (me)
2nd) Cattiva
3rd) Bandit

Lyrics

Verse 1: Bandit

I've been through the work, and I payed the tax
so look through the dirt at my blade of grass
Italian Deniro needs to shave his ass
cuz with hair like that you could braid his back
it's a guido out the speakers, with no wife beaters
in a diego tee, takin ya white sneakers
cuz I'm a nympho, a bandit, and a klepto
I tell her go down south...Sex Pole
every word out my mouth is the best known globally,
and in fact, since cattiva got my back
imma run this track with reefer, and blow the speakers
to several pieces, and thats the thesis
I use this rap shit to master my backflips
you can practice with kung fu
I know more art of war than Sun Tzu
I dart from the floorboards just to get from under you

Hook: Bandit
If life is a war, then pain is the game
a knight with a sword is to save the day
Bandit and Cattiva on a track is a train
or massive amount of sativa on ya brain
(x2)

2nd Verse: Cattiva
If life is a war man, I’m fighting to the death
Sick bitch with grenade implants stapled in my chest
No mercy to anyone, fuck the world with respect
Your house becomes bloody, when I elevate my stress
Don’t second guess the power of a lady
Make you fall in love then wanna cut your wrist daily
Your safety’s at stake when I gaze into your eyes
As I reach for my razor, you try to touch my inner thigh
Quickly gash your throat when you try to kiss my lips
No evidence to investigate, I’ve CSI’ed that shit
I see inside your mind and I know just what you’re thinking
Laugh as you beg for mercy when I watch your body sinkin
Insane you could say, but I really feel ok
The Sicilian mama mia with Bandit, take you away
On a very wet trip somewhere deep within into the sea
Cause love is a battle field, when you fuck around with me

Hook x2

3rd Verse: Bandit
Don't get pissed dude, and risk the pistol across the face
that's all it takes, grab all the diamonds off the chain
hand me a wallet and a ball of change, im hall of fame
call my name, bandit sellin cane like it ain't no thing
im caught up in the game when im slangin that yaay
raisin the wage, cuz a case on the way,
paving the way with a razorblade, my mind speaks volumes
that'll play for days, I'mma bathe all you critics in gas,
find a match and light a flame, cuz hatin on me is a big mistake
Cuz all you dudes are fake, and imma bandit, goddamnit
we get on a track, its a classic, till then, next chapter


and no, I did not like how the hook turned out, but I got lazy near the end hahaha...

anyways, drop links and I will RTF, I welcome all comments good or bad, so lets hear 'em! :y: :y:
Last edited by j3andit on Jun 20th, '10, 18:08, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 20th, '10, 17:39

had to give it a listen.....damn...!
beat is raw....flows are nice...cattiva?..member on here??....she sounds dope...nice one
mixing could be better but oh well...kool :D if you plan to do a remix of this i might hop on it :whistle: :whistle: *hint hint*
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby classthe_king » Jun 20th, '10, 17:41

Beat was WAY to loud. I couldn't hear what you were saying at all
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 17:43

hahha yeah bro, cattiva is a member here, she was the only one that responded to my collab in MC lounge..and I've had this beat on my computer for like 2 years..and found it a few weeks ago...hahaha. appreciate the listen bro, holla @ me by PM.. :y:


@ class I'll go recheck the levels, but neither of us were recording with a decent mic, so my apologies for quality..best I could do..and it took like 3 hours to make it sound this crisp..maybe I'll turn down the DB on the beat...what would u recommend? -2DB or more or less?
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby classthe_king » Jun 20th, '10, 17:48

j3andit wrote:hahha yeah bro, cattiva is a member here, she was the only one that responded to my collab in MC lounge..and I've had this beat on my computer for like 2 years..and found it a few weeks ago...hahaha. appreciate the listen bro, holla @ me by PM.. :y:


@ class I'll go recheck the levels, but neither of us were recording with a decent mic, so my apologies for quality..best I could do..and it took like 3 hours to make it sound this crisp..maybe I'll turn down the DB on the beat...what would u recommend? -2DB or more or less?


I don't know what you're talking about cause I don't know much about music but either turn the vocals up or turn the beat down, or a mixture of both
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby BILI » Jun 20th, '10, 17:52

Its nice,but as Class said I cant hear shit,without those lyrics I wouldnt be able to follow it at all.So do something with it and then I`ll listen to it again and give a proper feed :y:
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 17:55

the beat is really high quality, which is probably why the vocals seem a bit drowned..cuz our mic's were pretty shitty...but yeah, I'll make some adjustments, and re-upload..thanks for the info :y: :smoking:
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby classthe_king » Jun 20th, '10, 17:56

Oh, and if you make a remix with C-Riz i'd hop on that too
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 18:01

I'll send you both the beat then :y: :y: the more the merrier hahaha..

only thing is, I could really use some back up with mixing, cuz I mixed all vocals down by myself..im still new to it.

and btw..I had to turn the beat down to -6DB to notice any kind of difference in vocal quality...so hahahhaa so the new version I upload should be much more crisp.
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '10, 18:04

classthe_king wrote:Oh, and if you make a remix with C-Riz i'd hop on that too


class,c-riz, tash collab?

btw yes fix ur volume otherwise i can't feed.
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 18:08

-6DB on beat volume now...

hope it sounds better for u guys :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '10, 18:16

j3andit wrote:I'll send you both the beat then :y: :y: the more the merrier hahaha..

only thing is, I could really use some back up with mixing, cuz I mixed all vocals down by myself..im still new to it.

and btw..I had to turn the beat down to -6DB to notice any kind of difference in vocal quality...so hahahhaa so the new version I upload should be much more crisp.


if i get on this collab, i'm down to do the mixing for the whole track
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 20th, '10, 20:29

I want on the remix

....I didn't like both of you on this, it sounds boring.

Cattiva did better but her syllables were rushed. Her delivery was boring and her using that she's a female to up herself lyrically was played.

Bandit was BORING. Lyrics were OK, delivery was iight. Flow was so stagnant, didn't sound too good at all. Mixing was good though so good job on that.
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby j3andit » Jun 20th, '10, 20:34

MC Anonymous wrote:I want on the remix.



hahaha damn, this should be good, since all u vets are gettin on the track, im gonna lay a different verse..this had an italian theme to it so I'll switch it up.


everyone who said they want to get on this and are serious, send me a PM, and I'll send you the untagged full quality beat...
Tash said he'd mix?? so I'm assuming send your vocals to him after you record them...

C-riz
Class
Tash
MC Anon
Bandit
Cattiva

should be a pretty dope lineup. ahhaa lookin forward to this.
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Re: Bandit Feat. Cattiva - Life is War (TRSHADY COLLAB)

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 21st, '10, 00:13

the first verse - I liked your voice and the mixing, the quality wasn't amazing, but you did the best you could and it sounds decent, I'd just feel it more if you put more delivery into it, and more emotion.. idk just me

Chorus - I liked the chorus, I like the lyrics on the chorus and the effects wasn't over done so i enjoyed it


2nd verse - Quality isn't as good as the first verse, I was feeling your lyrics tho and I think you had decent delivery


3rd verse - This was your best verse easily, I was really feelin this. I didn't enjoy the end tho when you changed you voice and kinda talked/rhymed, ruined the flow imo, but overall its a good song

7.5/10

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