Gibbsy_No More Starz *Brand New Single*

[GibbzyTrShady]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIbmFMRPLsw

Okai this is a new single off my debut album which drops friday this as got some deep bars an would apprciate any feed back please watch in 480p just becuz youtube dubs out quality playin lower
thanks yall i apprciate it
ONe Love!!!

[GibbzyTrShady]

bumppp

[TripleNineThree]

Intro/Chorus - Was really feeling this, has a deep feeling to it, makes me get excited for a really heartfelt track

Verse 1 - Was enjoying your flow on this. I like the back dubs where you're singing in the background on the end of the lines, makes it sound mainstream. Which is good if its a single. I think you could just make the words slightly more clear, but other than that the mixing is good, and maybe the quality could be up slightly but nothing you can do about that.

Verse 2 - Your flow was on point just like the first verse. I think I only heard once or twice where you slightly slightly slightly fell off the beat. Once again I was enjoying your mixtape and the background singing at the end of your rhymes. Enjoyed it, just like the 1st verse

OVERALL - Hook was dope. I just think you need to pronounce your words more clear, but it sounds like you have an accent so that just mite be on my part since I'm not use to your accent. I think the mixing could make the words more clear tho. I was really feeling the mixing on the track though, that made up for it. This is a solid track for a single fam!!

I give it a 7.5/10, it would be a 10/10 if it was more clear

Keep it up fam, can't wait to hear the actual LP!!

Hey do you think you could return the favor with some feed?? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=91013

[GibbzyTrShady]

thank you for the feed back man an yes ill rtf now!!

[jba1me]

you sound a little like t.i lol. i liked your flow on the track. i thought it was a really great song imo.

[GibbzyTrShady]

thank you i really apprciate it and i dont think you can get a better compliment than "you sound like a lil lyk t.i" so for that

[gutawafang]

This is very nice man. I like the flow in this. This is inspiring and the lyrics fit the beat.

[GibbzyTrShady]

Bump