The Merciless Freestyle

[mcZu]

I just had to do something quick with that beat...

Quality is bad, so, please, bear with me.

Zu - The Merciless Freestyle (Prod. Anno Domini)

Shoot yourself like MySpace bitches, now picture that
Don’t get in my space, bitches, I’ll hit your head
With a punch or two, call me Ali
Leaving the doctors screaming ICU like the Na’vi
Ah, see, I treat beef like tofu
It aint real, especially when I show you
What I’m supposed to do when I flow, dude
‘cause everything I’m saying is super just call me Goku
You’ll go through hell, so you’ll
Understand why my flow iller
‘cause I came to kill like the Israeli’s on the Flotilla
I’m more realer, sharp sublime, wolverine reaching
People know I’m classic like quarantine teaching
I’m preaching, you may be spitting
But I’m dope, rhymes made of key like when Drake be singing
The scene’s a slow mess
Rapping comes Naturally to me, ask Selena Gomez
I’m able to finish fables like breaking an Xbox
‘cause my diss able to disable
I’m like a Palestinian pissing of tanks, yeah, my text rocks

[TripleNineThree]

The lyrics were good.

You need to turn the beat up and turn your vocals down. Your vocals are way overpowering the beat, it makes it sound like an acapella because they arn't together at all.

Your flow could use some work, you feel off the beat a couple places that I heard and maybe working on the mixing. The quality isn't great, but I realise thats not your fault, just work on the mixing and that will in-turn increase the quality.

You also need to work on pronouncing your words. There was a lot of words I couldn't understand but that just mite be that accent you have that I'm not use to

Overall keep it up man. The lyrics were really good, just keep working on the other things, they mainly come with time. Keep it up fam!!!! I'll be look for music by you

Think you could return the feed fam?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=91013

[mcZu]

Thanks for the feed, bro. I forgot to state that the pella was a freestyled recording of a while ago put on the instrumental, so it's more of a remix then a recording. Appreciate the feed.