Ruthless - I Hear Them Calling

[Tranquil]

Yoooo, ok this is over that track that has Kid Cudi on it. I recorded this track drunk (my voice sounds weird) haha, anyway let me no what you guys think oh and yes i no that in some parts the flow slips, but awell

Link: http://limelinx.com/files/53c01b9950b7a ... 8e6f3c86e0

[Tranquil]

bump

[TripleNineThree]

Hook = AMAZING, I loved this hook man!!

1st verse = I could feel your delivery and flow. Like you said you were drunk haha so I hear a couple times where the flow fell off, but other than that, that was good. The lyrics were decent, they didn't stick out at me or anything but it worked. The mixing was simple, and that also worked, I guess you coulda upped the mixing to up the quality slightly. The only thing was the quality, it was decent but it coulda been upped, but nothing you can do


2nd verse = The delivery improved on this. But the fall fell off a little more IMO. Same as before, quality could be upped same with mixing, still enjoyable listen though


OVERALL - decent song, just work on mixing thats all I give it a 7.5/10

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[Tranquil]

^^ thanks man, and yeah i dont really think much of the mixing on this track, it was just a track to throw out here, ya no?

[gutawafang]

I plan to use this beat too.



Yeah, you sound like you're drunk. LOL.

But the lyrics is very very good man. Flows quite well too man. Nice.

[jba1me]

idk why but when i first heard this i thought of proof because of the voice lol. anyways i liked it.couldnt tell u were drunk lol. thought the lyrics were on point.

[classthe_king]

This is an amazing beat man lol. This is easily your best song man. I think your vocals are a little low though. Turn it up and this would be the shit.

If you wanna do a remix or something to this beat hit me up

[theJFKshow]

I've used this before too.. check out my version:

http://www.myspace.com/jfkmikodin