Jaz - "Fantasy Girl"

[Jaz]

I made this track a couple months ago, but never released it. Anyway here it is, and it will be on my mixtape coming this winter, which has yet to be named.

http://www.divshare.com/download/11902536-23c

It will be on my youtube soon, but still check out my other vids and all that good stuff!
www.youtube.com/jaz8899


Produced by Sinima

Lyrics:

(Chorus)
Come with me into a fantasy
where there’s a dream there’s a way it seems
you can be there if you want before too long
as time fades into eternity
as we gaze into the stars and think
a fantasy is where we all belong

(V1)

This is a fantasy world, and you're my fantasy girl
And I'll be damned if we ain't chillin' in a canopy, curled up
Insanity is vanishing, adjusting my sight
Gettin' clammy and can it be that girl with me tonight
And any man that puts hands on you gets slammed in a fight
He's just an animal right? I just won't have it
And I see you got a booty, but I won't grab it
I got respect for a female, your past? Don't need details
Move fast or just keep snail, it's your choice
When I have a bad day I just need your voice
All my worries melt away, you make it day in night
When it gets dark and then it rains, you're my savin' light
And I'm cravin' you right now, I'm catchin' a flight down
I'm settin' the mic down, and pickin' you up
Missin' you hard, can't happen quickly enough
I look up at the stars, and hope my wish gets some luck

(Chorus)

(V2)

And I swear girl, always I'll be true to you
That trait is rare shawty, why I got a cold center
A lot of heartbreak, plus it's been a cold winter
I got my feelings locked away like a born sinner
But these ceilings drop away, I see a warm glimmer
And I hope it doesn't fade when a storm enter
One little fight, we alright; but the light's dimmer
It's all right in your sight, but the plight's inner
One of us leaves, but the other's still not quite a winner
I'd say this is a mistake, but it might offend her
So much rage buildin' up, it could ignite a splinter
While I turn pages and I write, I invite a mender
This will calm me through it, don't need embalming fluid
Cuz life goes on, it may have fallen off the tracks
But it cycles on, I guess you might be gone
But then a little down the road I find out I was wrong

(Chorus)

(V3)

You say hi while I'm dancin' with this girl Brittany
Don't know why you'd interrupt, that just seems shifty
And I must apologize, but she's here wit me
Then that feelin' that you had seems to start sinkin'
You start to turn around and cry, then i get to thinkin'
You know you coulda been mine, even last weekend
But you picked this night to reach your hand to me
I guess you'll only be mine inside your fantasy

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

damn this was a great track...loved the 2nd verse the most...

1verse: sounded boring delivery wise....but mixing was clean...your flow was nice...tho you some transition in flows could be a lil more tighter..noticed that in the middle "your choice//your voice"

2nd verse: liked the way you made most of it ryhme...also nice multies in there...flow was solid as fuck here..no flaw that i spot...and the way you end it...

3rd verse: uh mixing sounds disorted...like the panning went wrong..idk..maybe becuz i listen via headphones now...and um...was nuttin special...i dont think 3rd verse was needed....either end it with a bang or leave it...

real nice track overall... i enjoyed listening to it

[Jaz]

Thanks for the feedback broski, I'll see what I can do about the panning stuff you were talking about, but I think it might just be the dubs there (which I purposely did), idk.

[Jaz]

The youtube video is normal quality now, and it's also on my soundclick now: www.soundclick.com/jazny

[Jaz]

Thanks man, means a lot.

[Jaz]

Quick bump before bed.

[classthe_king]

Can you up it to something else

[Jaz]

Can you up it to something else

?

[classthe_king]

Can you up it to something else

?

Youtube doesn't work for me nor divshare

[Jaz]

oooh, yeah try my soundclick:

www.soundclick.com/jazny

[classthe_king]

Thanks ...

I loved the beat and that sample, this was a great track man. Your quality is so clean, I love it. Flow was on point the whole time, and the flow and delivery really matched the beat and mood of the song. Great lyrics too, much better then every song out there talking bad about women

When I have a bad day I need your voice...so true

[Jaz]

Thanks man, glad to hear you're liking it.

[classthe_king]

Thanks man, glad to hear you're liking it.

Yeah, I actually downloaded it and have listened to it a couple times.

[Mr. Chambers]

pretty sick shit my dude...i mean i ain't one for love tracks...but this one was unique...so i can dig it.....we gotta get some more shit popping (pause)

[Unscarred]

This was really dope i will bump this track for sure. Keep up the good work man