by Tash8 » Jul 6th, '10, 18:22
the intro was cool, got annoying quick though. Funny at first..anyways the song was tight an all and u know that so i'll focus on stuff u might not know.
The breathing is mad annoying..sometimes u breathe so loud i can't understand what ur saying in the next word. the subject matter is just not my thing (obviously) Your flow is nice, I like how u finally learned to change up flows within a song. good job on that.