Danny Thomas - Battle Field Of Hearts NEWTRACK (With Lyrics)

[TheOfficialThomas]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZH9F5vaHTFw

you dont even understand
this feeling I cant describe
its a mutual vide I just feel so alive when im with you it just hits you so hard
like cupid came its ble
ssed you with his beautiful little arrows
its so romantic when i aint with you its like a panic
i dont know what to do with myself
its like I need you for my health
its like
I can hold you in my arms I feel like ill never lose you
then we step appart its like I left my heart in your arms so you can take care of it
but its hard cause I know at any moment you can take it and break it
but dont be mistaken I know you that love me back I can feel it when you hug me back



I- L - O - V - E - Y - O - U - D
and thats definetly an understatement
I been waiting to find someone like you
I know we fight to but we get through it every time boo
I can write so many rhymes about yyou combined I hope to put togehter the best song ever
so that you can play it and rewind everytime itll make you smile everytime
i hope you know that im yours cause I know that your mine you put chills down my spine everytime I feel your lips with every kiss
we collide
its the best feeling that ive ever had im glad that we met


i dont care who we left upset it doesnt matter to me
the only thing that matters to me is you its true
you make me smile you make me laugh you look past my passed
and I appreciate that I write tracks and I rap about you
Never thought id ever do that to be honest with you
now heres my promise to you I promise to be there for you when your feeling lonely
and I promise that youll always be my only its true
its an explosion when we touch its such a rush and i love it much
our love is like a battle field but ill never break your heart
cause if we ever break appart ill be breaking my own heart




let me know what you think

got the beat off soundclick.. im not making any profits or selling this song. it was just a demo

[gutawafang]

It's very good. In terms of flow. But it could be better mixed. It's good mixing actually but can be better. Lyrics is very good. Very on point, consistent.

Good choice of beat, very unique.

[TheOfficialThomas]

Thanks for your input(:
I did the best I could with a 10$ mic and 3$ earphones and a free program :P
Im not a very good mixer.. I just rap .. I really need a producer.

[TheOfficialThomas]

yeeep

[Robbie G]

That was actually really good. You have a nice rap voice and the flow was on point.

[TheOfficialThomas]

thanks its much appreciated!

[TheOfficialThomas]

bump

[ahckiryL]

hook was cool, remind me of some JT/mathew santos type shit...quality on ur verses need a lil work caz it dont sound mixed...lyrics were real simple and no complexity or switch ups in flows...emotion was ok, kinda ehhh and ur punch ins were kinda overlappin ur other ryming bars in the first verse...also turn ur vocals up a lil to caz the beats kinda drowin it out....yea so work on those thing a lil more mane and keep doin ur thang...1

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[TheOfficialThomas]

thanks man appreciate the feed back

[Terry_M]

The flow was really, really good. The quality can be improved but you've pointed that out already. The lyrics were pretty good too and so was the emotion. It was a good track.

[TheOfficialThomas]

thanks man! appreciate the feedback!

[TheOfficialThomas]

im just about to record this song in a proffesional studio for the first time ever. and im re-doing this song to play on the local radio station for 3 local towns around us. I'm pretty pumped!

[Terry_M]

That's great news man. Hopefully the start of something.