Codyp (Feat. Chieko Kawabe) - Be My Girl

[codyp]

After a 3 year hiatus, I am getting back into the game. Since I am, I thought I would share a song. A little for warning, I have been called.. different. Hope you enjoy.

11. bemygirl.mp3 - 10.33MB

Lyrics:

(Maybe I wanna be your girl
Maybe all I need is you)

When I jump on the mic
All the girls want it
We go together
Like gin and tonic
But the show is just one night
Time is not on your side
I know it may feel right
But you are not my bride
(Without time on my side)
But those are things we will never see
Yes those are things we will never see

Chorus:
And when I am on the mic
Man it's like love at first sight
And when I tell you that I love you
It is just a lie

And I know out of all my lies
You still believe you want to
(Be your girl)
You want to
You want to
Be my girl

Mixed emotions when I perform
Slit wrists feelin like the norm
But you're happy
And opposites attract
(It's shameful to shed tears here)
Too bad this is only cuz of rap
My words invoke emotion
And emotion can be a slap
Don't fall for me
Because I'm only just a trap

Chorus

My music is with out formation
The correlation between form and patience
Is the core I'm facin
Dare to race it
Or erase it
Turn back and act like
It didn't look me in the eye?
Deadly snake grin
Fuckin up my high
Screaming die die
Thats how you feel
When you listen to this
Every time I get on the mic
It's like a mission to rip
But then I get to slip
And it sounds kinda sucky
Try n' listen
Shit I get more spice
Then kfc
If you want to fuck
Then don't come cryin n' bitchin
The point of this song
Is it's not love
It's just the vibe Im givin

Chorus


(Instead of running, I try to see what's next with my own eyes
In the world waiting ahead along this path
Even if I get hurt again
It definitely won't stop me, because of this feeling

Many times I've thought that it's fine even like that
Although I'm sharing you with someone else
Resenting it, I've cried countless times
Even if it's just a lie to comfort me say that I'm the only one

Maybe baby
I wanna be your girl
Maybe I wanna be your girl
Maybe baby
Maybe all I need is you
All I need is you)

[ahckiryL]

This was different...sounded like country, Pop, and Rap mixed in a song...Hook was aight untill the last 3 words when u go into James Earl jones mode...ur flow on ur verses was really shaky and off some times...adlibs were a lil distracting and emotion was ok I guess...I just couldnt get into the vibe, not my cup of tea...but yea work on ur flow more caz u was all over the place...and keep doin ur thang mane...1

[codyp]

Yeah, haha I am not sure where you got country.
Maybe I should post a song that's more towards this audience, but thank you for the feedback.

My flow is odd I know, what would you do to work on that?

[DelinQuent]

honestly, this sounds extremely jumbled and messy.

I like how you tried to be 100% different, but it didn't work for me.

With that said, the flow's just not there. It doesn't match the beat at all. the pauses aren't steady, some spots you had a longer pause than other spots causing it to sound very jumbled in spots.

The lyrics were quite random in some spots.

Wasn't really into this. I'll continue to check your stuff if/when you post more. stay at it.

[codyp]

Thank you, I will post another soon. I just did not want to flood the board with my music.