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Re: my first rough as shit "verse"

Postby gutawafang » Jul 16th, '10, 08:25

Soft. :laughing:

Flow is very good. It's a unique flow i think. :worship:
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Re: my first rough as shit "verse"

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 16th, '10, 13:29

yeah your starter line had a flow but then you lost track...
umm...yeah nothing real good...you started promising but eh overall..
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Re: my first rough as shit "verse"

Postby classthe_king » Jul 16th, '10, 15:02

You should probably work on your writing in the CW for awhile before you start recording.
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Re: my first rough as shit "verse"

Postby Solace » Jul 18th, '10, 16:29

classthe_king wrote:You should probably work on your writing in the CW for awhile before you start recording.

This.

Like when someone starts audio recording I at least expect them to know what they're doing lyrically.
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Re: my first rough as shit "verse"

Postby Terry_M » Jul 18th, '10, 19:19

I could hardly hear the vocals and the flow was pretty off at times, but keep working at it and you will definitely improve.
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