Gibbsy Phone Lines ( Offical Video)

[GibbzyTrShady]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCwGCf_LiMM

okay yall so this is a lil video i made for this track
leave some feed and let me no what you think
an peep my broken pieces thread to download the album
One love yall

[Terry_M]

Not a bad video actually considering the limited resources you had.

And you know how I feel about the track already.

[tjb]

dude honestly i cant understand you for shit. video effects were kinda cool tho.

[GibbzyTrShady]

dude honestly i cant understand you for shit. video effects were kinda cool tho.

okay man fair enuff yeah i do got a accent and the mixing isnt immensly good however check out my other tracks to and Terry M Thankyou for the comment bro stil working on new ish now ive blown the dust off my mic you no what im talking about

and yo' people keep the feed coming, and if you want feed back say so

[tjb]

dude honestly i cant understand you for shit. video effects were kinda cool tho.

okay man fair enuff yeah i do got a accent and the mixing isnt immensly good however check out my other tracks to and Terry M Thankyou for the comment bro stil working on new ish now ive blown the dust off my mic you no what im talking about

and yo' people keep the feed coming, and if you want feed back say so

from what i heard it sounded like your lyrics were pretty good though, and mixing isnt the easiest thing to do. ill def check your other stuff tho

[GibbzyTrShady]

Thank You man i really appricate it im slowly workin on the mixing and things atm just trying to get everything sussed :L thanks for the feed

[GibbzyTrShady]

bumppppp

[Jay-19]

This track is fucking hot man!

[GibbzyTrShady]

This track is fucking hot man!

Thank You Man Realli Apprciate it

[B.A.D.]

wow, this is a pleasant surprise. you should def feed some other people to let em know u exist and hint them at taking glimpses at your stuff, and I'm not saying this about this forum, but about music in general man.

ok, the feed now (music wise):
- first of all, this is good, the whole concept is nice, and you can deliver well for it, the only thing I fear is that its not that Hip Hop/Rap. as a matter of fact this is pop with a rock influence, and it ain't bad at all, beacuse the song is great, its entertaining and it works for its purpose.
-the mixing is clean, on the effects on your voice it also brings a rock/pop feel to it, but its hq so its good either way.
-the beat is nice, again also a pop/rock type of hip hop beat but its good, hopefully its not a soundclick random beat bcuz that will bring the track's prestige down.
-on the rapping itself, a couple mumbles and slurrs, some lines (e.g. in the middle and the end of the first verse), are not well written and they cause the flow to get shaky and un-naturall, the vocab, multi's and all that is cool, def. working well with the style of track.
-so audio overall, its a good song, its entertaining, its dope, its fun... although more than fixing stuff is asking yourself if that is what you do. just fix the writting method so your flow goes back to natural, and get a little more complex on the rhymes.

video wise:
- excelent! haha, its perfect for an underground cat, low-budget, interesting, a couple lol's, namean?, but my recomendation is that, if you know anybody that does flash animations, let em do a couple stuff, some comic type shit and blend it along the video, that would add some spice to it and make it more entertaining, plus a step up.

great video.

[GibbzyTrShady]

yo' now that was great feed thank you big ax i really apprciate you takeing the time to explain and feed properly and i appricate all the comments and advice and will take all you have said into consideration thank you for all the feed everybody and i will be feeding more very shortly myself