I Need A Dollar

[tjb]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKfsT6uJFbE

please please please please feed me on this one.

[gutawafang]

Feedback's a must?

Chorus/beat is good.

Flow is pretty good. Delivery can improve better. It's sorta like you mumbling but still it's quite clear. Not bad. Lyrics is pretty good but delivery spoils that.

You bit some linessss. Like it matters. LOL. Overall, I guess flow stands out.

[tjb]

Feedback's a must?

Chorus/beat is good.

Flow is pretty good. Delivery can improve better. It's sorta like you mumbling but still it's quite clear. Not bad. Lyrics is pretty good but delivery spoils that.

You bit some linessss. Like it matters. LOL. Overall, I guess flow stands out.

haha thankks an yea a must an i realized i bit some lines. but i record outta a closet an it gets hot so i say fck it lol

[Terry_M]

The flow is quite good, but yeah the delivery can improve a lot. Overall not too bad of a track though.

[tjb]

The flow is quite good, but yeah the delivery can improve a lot. Overall not too bad of a track though.

thankss a lot. and yeah i havent rele found a delivery style i like and/or can pull off consistently

[Zsmalle]

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