Bar & Snow Ft. Dee - Money Aint Everything

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R806wEDN48

anyone who liked fast spitting needs to check snows verse he got a killer breakdown.

feedback appreciated

Dee is new 2 this, he is a singer and a rapper, better singer imo but hes puting in alot of effort with the rapping so be nice with his feedback lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat is bangin...Dee comes in nice...i agree..better hook from him than verse..
your verse is wicked man...flow is alive..if you know what i mean..
no offence but there's somthin about Snow that doesnt impressive me..
but nice ass hook... i could see C-Riz droppin a nice Remix to it

[B.A.D.]

Yo C-Riz, I'll hop on that remix with you

I like this one, the hook is great I like it. the first verse not so much, it sounds weird, not decent, like its unmixed. but I like the flow.
verse 2.. Bar, your voice changed, I like the end of your verse, really hard to understand, and there's a lot of P's and B's that damage the quality, other than that its good, nothing else to feed. great verse
verse 3, I dont like it, is that snow or dee?... the flow is good, and the end of his verse is really smooth, but the begining is shaky and could use more clarity, a lot of slurrs, maybe its a scottish slang or I dont know, but doesnt do it for me.

overall, bar had the best verse, this dude's hook is fire. the beat is ok, good job. I thought you guys were a little more street and underground, but I can see why youre looking at this road. its alrite, plus if you looking for a beat of this type I can hook ya up

good job

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

beat is bangin...Dee comes in nice...i agree..better hook from him than verse..
your verse is wicked man...flow is alive..if you know what i mean..
no offence but there's somthin about Snow that doesnt impressive me..
but nice ass hook... i could see C-Riz droppin a nice Remix to it

thanks man, its not dee on the hook the beat was already on it, its from soundclick i can get it you on msn if you want it.

Yo C-Riz, I'll hop on that remix with you

I like this one, the hook is great I like it. the first verse not so much, it sounds weird, not decent, like its unmixed. but I like the flow.
verse 2.. Bar, your voice changed, I like the end of your verse, really hard to understand, and there's a lot of P's and B's that damage the quality, other than that its good, nothing else to feed. great verse
verse 3, I dont like it, is that snow or dee?... the flow is good, and the end of his verse is really smooth, but the begining is shaky and could use more clarity, a lot of slurrs, maybe its a scottish slang or I dont know, but doesnt do it for me.

overall, bar had the best verse, this dude's hook is fire. the beat is ok, good job. I thought you guys were a little more street and underground, but I can see why youre looking at this road. its alrite, plus if you looking for a beat of this type I can hook ya up

good job

thanks for the feed man its dee on the third verse.

and yeh man we doo street/underground tracks but we got alot of more mainstream stuff aswell, we try to put our fingers in all the pies so to say.

[Terry_M]

I really like the first verse, second and third not so much, but a good track overall.

[mart85]

nice track guys, it was cool

I liked the flow near the end of your verse Bar, you kinda switched it up a little, it was cool. and nice fast flow from snow.

[classthe_king]

Your verse was easily the best. I couldn't understand snow at all. I can't wait till you get some studio quality so it sounds better.

[TripleNineThree]

Chorus - Sick!! Where did you get this beat? I would love to do a remix over this

1st verse - Flow - The flow was really good, I liked the fast flow. Mixing could be upped slightly, the quality is lacking a little bit so just worked on the mixing. Delivery was good

2nd verse - Flow - Sick, I couldn't understand a tiny bit of words, but thats just cause I'm not use to your accent its sick though! Delivery - Good, I could feel your emotion. Once again this mixing could also be upped to improve the quality, but that comes with time

3rd verse - Flow - It was good, not as good as other. The quality wasn't as good as the other two verses and it sounds like its panned out to the side and it made it sound off from the other verse IMO. Lyrics were good, keep improving


OVERAL - 7/10 It was a very solid song. Mixing/Quality just needs to be improved. The hook was sick, once again is there anyway I can cop this beat and do a song to it?? Beat was sick!!

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