Been So Long (Produced by Big Ax-D) 2nd single!

[Mr. Chambers]

2nd single off "Suck It Bitch Vol. II" good looks to ax on the beat and art



http://limelinx.com/files/07c84c215b49e ... 7451809b37
http://www.supashare.net/hdjo8d4eg2rr

i hold a stifling eye for whats rightfully mine//
i can put sight to the blind and put freight to the light//
so while i was in my corner wasting away//
well yall was pussy footing and tried degrading my name//
i laughed all the way home from breaking the bank//
must be crazy to think i was ever takin the blame//
cmon son....everyone is mixed with evil//
you can work the situation but never fix the people//
theres love and theres hate....differences is deceitful//
can copy the master....but never give it a sequal//
the world's debt is what i wish my dividends equaled//
the root of all problems.........and i'm driven by evils//


so i told you that i'd be back like never before//
the young gunner sharp shooting in a veteran's war//
no wait...i got a better allure//
but all my shortcomings seem to magnify when my cheddar is short//
fuck a deal....i look to others to learn from mistakes//
but toss me a mil and see if i can turn it away//
it just isn't happening dog//
life is just too fucked up for me to be rapping it off//
i been in the slums of pittsburgh for way too long//
obama's reachin for change...but shit stays so wrong//
its why every occasion..i burry the beat//
i'm dwayne wade in oh ten...won't carry the heat//


so now i'm the booth...in hopes i blew up quicker//
hating on chambers...yelling verses...consuming liquor//
figures....look at this kid stagger around//
breaking mirrors like "this is what the swaggers about"//
you got it twisted my dude....no rollin the dutch//
i gave you style....the cool of a rush//
that fuck you attitude...careless mind state//
brain of crime waves...kats that clear from my face//
your creativity....well i'm splitting the blame//
but since this lil fame...this shit ain't the same//
forgetting your roots...so go back to the dirt//
grimy and hard.....don't matter if a track or a verse//

[Solace]

Something about the mixing on this and Sticcy Flow is retarded, makes the vocals sound low quality. I dont know if Im the only one here hearing this. But your flow and rhymes are solid, and thats a dope sample. Your humping sounds here and there dont help though. Good track overall though.

[Mr. Chambers]

^ i loved the sample, let my humping go.

[Terry_M]

The lyrics are good, the flow is really good. But I agree with Solace, there's something with the mixing.

And well done again to Ax with the beat, banging.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ax you def stepped it up...you gettin there...
did you the add the sample or did chambers do it himself?
chambers your mixing was awful....your breaths were way too loud...too much hiss aswell..
flow and everything around it is pretty solid..

[Jay-19]

I agree with everything Solace said basically.

Good track man!

[Mr. Chambers]

yea apparently my mix on this was the biggest flaw. i'ma prolly remix the vocals for the tape. I had this problem with the cypher shit me, bar, and kez did. but good looks on the feedback i appreciate it!

[*MIRANDA*]

had to comment cuz this song is awesome.. love the grimey feel, u and ax did a great job

[classthe_king]

Great song man, I can't wait for your mixtape.

[classthe_king]

Nice, second verse especially.

Seeeeeee, we can all be friends

[Tash8]

it was a coo song..

"i'm dwayne wade in oh ten...won't carry the heat//"

what the fuck is 010, it's either 2010 or 10 not oh ten

just saying..nice line besides that. overall good song

[Mr. Chambers]

^thank you.....i coulda said two-oh-ten....
but...fuck it....thats the attitude i'm going for..sooo

but thanks for listening

[Mr. Chambers]

up!

[classthe_king]

Hows the release date looking

[Mr. Chambers]

another month or so....only cuz i'm going away for a few weeks where i can't record, just writing @ most. i got most of it done tbh...but i want a wide range to choose from, still got some collabs and shit