New "That's The Anthem" Collab..Danny Thomas & other artists

[TheOfficialThomas]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdZ-XejjR78

I did this a couple months back.

[tjb]

[Terry_M]

I'm telling you man, you have the lyrics, the flow and the charisma, you just need some proper equipment and then you are on your way to something.

[TheOfficialThomas]

Thanks man! I'm getting it all this week im pretty damn pumped!

[Peace_Maker]

First rule of hip-hop, don't do a track with a guy named Dj Shahmoney, Young Spice, or Yung Rebel.

With that out of the way, your flow and delivery are good. Not amazing but good. You do need better equipment. The only flaw I saw that stuck out was your lyrics. Seriously bro, step them up. You didn't say anything for a while.

im bout to pull an eminem
and make every one look stupid

you cant tell me how to do this music
the way i do it so ruthless
whos this
its thomas mother fuckers
its polished im on the track
im accomplished get your facts straight
quit the hate
I domilish plus I act great
while you all spit the same

Forget the aim my bars spitting full clips
bullets and blullets pull it to pull it to pull it
my words are weaponery with no safety lock
you are no threat to me quit the hate me talk
rappers gonna hit this beat talk about the anthem
me i took it for ransom

That whole middle section was useless. I don't like the content but I mean if you're going to do it, do it right son.

No hate though. Just serious criticism. Keep it up.