Dee - What If (Feat. Snow)

[-Dee-]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGUxZdVNG7I

In my opinion, probably my best work yet so I thought I should post it here and you guys can give me an opinion. Like Bar, I'm Scottish so alot of it will be hard to understand but I will apreciate honest opions. Cheers!

[Terry_M]

The flow and delivery were really good and the lyrics were good too. This a very good track I can bump.

[-Dee-]

The flow and delivery were really good and the lyrics were good too. This a very good track I can bump.

Thanks alot man, really appreciate it.

[MikeNUFC]

Your flow is really on point, most of the lyrics are nice, theres a few filler lines here and there but overall it's pretty good.

Did you get the idea from Jadakiss' What If? Even though I feel the concept is kinda ripped of from that Jada track, it's delivered well. Hook is nice, and beat is perfect.

As Terry said, something I could bump.

[-Dee-]

Your flow is really on point, most of the lyrics are nice, theres a few filler lines here and there but overall it's pretty good.

Did you get the idea from Jadakiss' What If? Even though I feel the concept is kinda ripped of from that Jada track, it's delivered well. Hook is nice, and beat is perfect.

As Terry said, something I could bump.

Thanks mate, always nice to hear good feedback.
Actually dont think I've ever heard Jadakiss - What If before, but I'm gonna go listen to it now to see if it is similar.

[-Dee-]

Just gave that Jadakiss tune a listen, never heard it before but I can see how you think my songs similar seeing as he begins with "what if" too. Quite strange listening to it actually, cus to me it feels like Jadkakiss has stole my idea even though that song was released before mine, because I have never heard it before.

[B.A.D.]

what program are you currently using to clean and mix your vocals??
-depending on the program I may help you with some effects you could use.

also, when you are using this usd mis, try not to hold it. its better to place it in a high spot and rap to it without touching it. I also assume that you dont have a pop filter... theyre cheap, buy one, or if youre to lazy for that you can also make one yourself, there's a couple tuts on youtube on how to do em lol.

but yeah, tell me what program u are using

[-Dee-]

what program are you currently using to clean and mix your vocals??
-depending on the program I may help you with some effects you could use.

also, when you are using this usd mis, try not to hold it. its better to place it in a high spot and rap to it without touching it. I also assume that you dont have a pop filter... theyre cheap, buy one, or if youre to lazy for that you can also make one yourself, there's a couple tuts on youtube on how to do em lol.

but yeah, tell me what program u are using

Thanks for the feedback.
I'm using Acid Pro 6.0 at the moment man.

[B.A.D.]

Thanks for the feedback.
I'm using Acid Pro 6.0 at the moment man.

If you dont record in a studio, or sound proof room or some place like that, Acid Pro is useless. only use it for the final mastering and the final mixdown. I dont know if you are recording directly from the mic to that program, if you do, I'm amazed that its not causing lag. thats good. but if you are using amateur equipment and are not placed in an adequate recording atmosphere it is better to mix your acapellas either on adobe or cool edit. its easy, fast and does the job perfect.

hope that helped out