http://www.facebook.com/video/video.php ... 3164&saved
I did this song about 3 months ago as a mixtape single.. I;ve upped my game since, but still a decent track!
lemme know what u guys think.
thanks.
Danny Thomas - Airplanes Remix
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Danny Thomas - Airplanes Remix
by TheOfficialThomas » Aug 6th, '10, 13:50
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Re: Danny Thomas - Airplanes Remix
by tjb » Aug 6th, '10, 15:04
ill start off on a positive note, the flow wasnt too bad.
and i understand that this is your life and everything, but that
beginning like intro thing you did was pretty corny - not gonna lie.
also, i gotta say track would have been a hundred times better if
you changed you voice. but pretty good delivery i guess so switch some things up and it'll be nice
and i understand that this is your life and everything, but that
beginning like intro thing you did was pretty corny - not gonna lie.
also, i gotta say track would have been a hundred times better if
you changed you voice. but pretty good delivery i guess so switch some things up and it'll be nice
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Re: Danny Thomas - Airplanes Remix
by Terry_M » Aug 7th, '10, 02:28
The flow was good and the lyrics weren't bad, but the audio quality has always been the one thing really holding you back in the tracks of yours I've heard.
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