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Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

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Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 16th, '10, 17:54

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ef44Vr45qu0

im on the second verse, i recorded it in the studio then threw the pella to wee d and his producer mixed it (coz i know someone will mention the overlays lol)

feedback appreciated :y:

my verse
roflcopter chopping up the livers in my whopper
i make her rofl while shes sucking on my gobstopper
i dont stop you i just fucking rip yer head apart
i shread your heart and eat the part that makes my fucking soul go hard
go back start dont collect no money you got barred
he who laughs last laughs the hardest well thats what grasp
but it wont last once you fucking meet glass
dont ask, i sometimes think about the green grass
but then i cover it in blood and call red mud
i said a this to my pherapist he said im sick
i said i know thats what i pay you for now suck my dick
yeh my brains fucked dont even go for a looker
im the sort of guy to pay more for a under age hooker
my sense a humors laughing at guy thats tumor
but just for the fans ill end this the sickest i can
LOL at the police coz i still got maddie mcanne
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Re: Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

Postby classthe_king » Aug 16th, '10, 18:12

Yeah I hated the echoing, good verse besides that.
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Re: Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

Postby $0 R3@L » Aug 16th, '10, 22:37

but just for the fans ill end this the sickest i can
LOL at the police coz i still got maddie mcanne


didnt really find this line very tastful and was a mistake to mention on a track called LOL.

Verse felt really random with no concept or a contex with minimal quailty content :coffee:

not bad just not good.
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Re: Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 16th, '10, 22:42

$0 R3@L wrote:
but just for the fans ill end this the sickest i can
LOL at the police coz i still got maddie mcanne


didnt really find this line very tastful and was a mistake to mention on a track called LOL.

Verse felt really random with no concept or a contex with minimal quailty content :coffee:

not bad just not good.


well the concept is LOL stuff that makes us laugh, our sense of humor.

and it was not a mistake coz i cant make a mistake in anything i write if i choose to write it
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Postby $0 R3@L » Aug 18th, '10, 23:45

so its not a mistake because you chose to make the mistake?

ok

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Re: Wee D Bar Snow & Mako - LOL

Postby Weather Man » Aug 19th, '10, 06:52

It was sick, really liked the beat that was chosen for the song.
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