Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

[Tash8]

I wish I had the time to redo this song, but unfortunately I'm moving and I have no clue when I'll have my set up back again. So I'll release what I've done of this song so far...enjoy


^ax of course.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/79528217407844ca/
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9547950

Lyrics:
now First thing I wanna say you sicken me
I dont really give a fuck what you think of me
naw not anymore I'm slipping free,
I'm alone my own and I'm living me
I'm falling from the sky or so it seems like, I feel like
there ain't a parachute to let loose I'm in free flight
The best view I never really thought I'd ever reach heights
like these and I wish we'd rewrite these times
so I finally-sleep alright these nights
but it's time that you leave and I write these rhymes
as i'm thinking in my mind like why would I rewind?
when I'm this close to find a way to leave you behind
you took me so high but it wasn't worth the fall
worst of all, it was love- the worst curse of all
and I actually loved you it's why it hurts to fall
and at first it was (impossible)

I ain't looking for redemption or vengeance
revenge of any sort, I won't resort though I'm tempted
expect nothing more, cause I've learned how to accept it
and now, I guess we're left with whatever happens next is
is out of my control but I'm not really resenting
I waited, debated, whether to embrace it
saw it heading bad but I didn't wanna face it
time-I done wasted why?-got complacent
but I'M- not complaining I'M- just saying
it's draining my energy
psychically and mentally
these words that I blab
my artillery and weaponry
the only stabs I have
and the rest I kept to me
In a constant contest,
a struggle over nonsense
which I just can't conquest
or find myself a locksmith
who'd unlock this cockpit
that you will find me locked in
and I really dont like it,
-why else would I stop then?
but I don't wanna stop
there's gotta be a better option
It's crazy, -no I guess it's (impossible)

[Tash8]

anyone?

[Terry_M]

That was a beautiful song man. The beat, the hook, the lyrics. Delivery was good too.

[DƎRDYPK]

impressive stuff Tash
I like hearing you over your own beats

can't wait to hear some new material in the future
keep doing you

[Tash8]

That was a beautiful song man. The beat, the hook, the lyrics. Delivery was good too.

thx bro

impressive stuff Tash
I like hearing you over your own beats

can't wait to hear some new material in the future
keep doing you

thx man

[Kez]

This is fuckin great, you produced it? The whole song sounds very well-done, much higher than the normal standard on here. I won't really bother critiqueing cause i know whether i liked it or not and that's the main thing. You really have come a long way lol, i was surprised when the song started up. Good shit

[Emadyville]

Um...2nd verse you spit was hands down one of the greatest verses I have ever heard, simply amazing

First verse was dope, delivery could have been put a little more on a few words to bring out your lyrics more, but that's more opinion than it is a bad thing. Lyrics were amazing, flow was unique, voice was good on this, nothing wrong with pronounciation at all, which is great man.

2nd verse like I said, fucking unbelievable, rhymes, content, flow, delivery, just one of the best ever imo

best song i've heard on tr, on my ipod for a long time homie keep doing shit like this

btw great production, beats sick

[classthe_king]

Didn't like the chorus tbh, that was the main problem with the song. You're rapping was good though. I'm tired as fuck though so I'll leave better feed tommorow.

[Xray]

Didn't like the beat or the hook. I think this kind of music is mad played out with the whole sample doing the hook, then you rhyme about struggles or whatever. It's gotten really boring to me. You're gonna have to come up with more creative shit. Not feeling this song. Sorry bro.

[B.A.D.]

already told you on msn what to improve when re-recording it.

keep at it

I like the cover

[Tash8]

Didn't like the beat or the hook. I think this kind of music is mad played out with the whole sample doing the hook, then you rhyme about struggles or whatever. It's gotten really boring to me. You're gonna have to come up with more creative shit. Not feeling this song. Sorry bro.

wasn't your thing, that's cool...this song when i first heard it, it really brought out some emotion in me, which is why i sampled it (I heard it live at b.o.bs concert)

Didn't like the chorus tbh, that was the main problem with the song. You're rapping was good though. I'm tired as fuck though so I'll leave better feed tommorow.

thx

Wow Tash, this was fucking awesome. The production was amazing and I thought the hook you chose was perfect for the song. Just...wow. Thanks!

tried my best

Um...2nd verse you spit was hands down one of the greatest verses I have ever heard, simply amazing

First verse was dope, delivery could have been put a little more on a few words to bring out your lyrics more, but that's more opinion than it is a bad thing. Lyrics were amazing, flow was unique, voice was good on this, nothing wrong with pronounciation at all, which is great man.

2nd verse like I said, fucking unbelievable, rhymes, content, flow, delivery, just one of the best ever imo

best song i've heard on tr, on my ipod for a long time homie keep doing shit like this

btw great production, beats sick

mucho gracias

This is fuckin great, you produced it? The whole song sounds very well-done, much higher than the normal standard on here. I won't really bother critiqueing cause i know whether i liked it or not and that's the main thing. You really have come a long way lol, i was surprised when the song started up. Good shit

thx man

[Tash8]

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[mcZu]

Second verse shits over the first one, really powerfull verse. Technically and emotionally strong. I like the song, dope beat, probs on the beatmaking. You had some minor slip ups in terms of flow, I didn't like the singing (yours, not the sampled singing, 'cause that was awesome) and your delivery sounded a lil' bit boring at some spots.

But, overall, I liked it. Keep rapping, bro. You're improving and improving with every song you make.

[Robbie G]

Wow, I loved the sampled chorus, it really set the right mood for the track. My only complaint on the chorus would be that when you came in and said "impossible" it was really quiet and seemed a little odd/out of place. I'd either take it out or raise your volume there.

The first verse was decent. The lyrics were good and emotionally relatable. Your flow wasn't my personal favorite but it worked for the track/beat. The second verse was much better, the lyrics were fire and the flow seemed a lot smoother to me.

I also thought the beat was one of your best. You rode it well and it was perfect for the sung chorus. It was catchy without being watered down in my opinion.

Overall great song and you've improved a ton. Keep it up man.