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Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

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Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 21st, '10, 01:16

im featured on the 3rd verse obviously the only rap part :) check it out lemme know watcha think^^
http://www.zshare.net/audio/795546182a877223/

lyrics of the song though:

Lyrics: ( Written By Redzek)

[Verse 1: Gaston]

she was really..Older..than me
i was stupidly fallin on her hands
by her i discoverd what i never knew
she seemed so trustful
i thought it was true..
and what was always botherin me
that i always knew she never loved me
and when she talked..she was above me

[Chorus:Gaston]

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
i already saw
alliance in her arms

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
and i never knew
she was someone new

cuz she had the words

[Verse 2: Gaston]

And i had no life
thinkin of "my wife"
...even though i doubted
..that she always lied

and she got lost when talkin to me
the pain she caused when not walkin with me
and she deceived but i'd forgive
in her car.. i found ..this card
i screamed her ex is still in her heart
what does she hide
im gonna find out

[Chorus:Gaston]

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
i already saw
alliance in her arms

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
and i never knew
she was someone new

cuz she had the words


[Verse 3 : Redzek]
ayo..
then i stalked her,saw a garden,dog,company
a damn house,directly imagined family
during all that time..i was so blind..i was so blind

her man surprised me,directly came to me and just admit
i wasnt the first guy she sadly took him as a kid
during all that time..i was so blind..i was blind

it was sublime all the time,i was blind cuz im kind
girl now remind me to....just never mind
its a sign to resign,i wish i could rewind
thought you was mine..i thought you was mine!


[Chorus:Gaston x2]

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
i already saw
alliance in her arms

cuz she had the words
made me lose control
and i never knew
she was someone new

cuz she had the words


[Outro]
Lol.....!
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Re: Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby Terry_M » Aug 21st, '10, 02:29

The verse was a bit short, but the lyrics and the delivery really fit in well with the theme of the song and the flow was good most of the time. :y:
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Re: Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 21st, '10, 02:33

Terry_M wrote:The verse was a bit short, but the lyrics and the delivery really fit in well with the theme of the song and the flow was good most of the time. :y:

thanks man :)
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Re: Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby Weather Man » Aug 21st, '10, 06:32

The song wouldn't load on my computer, for some reason, but I red the lyrics and it flowed pretty good in my opinion really good man keep writing. :y:
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Re: Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 21st, '10, 09:43

that was enjoyable... your friend sings pretti good, but he needs to take clases, cuz I notice he is singing Mayor key to a minor key beat Lmao... so sometimes it can sound out of tune... but tell him to take a couple clases to understand what way to sing in x parts. non the less, very smooth and enjoyable

your verse.. :shakehead: ... buy a microphone :angry:
it was ok.... flow was a little too shaky, I like the way you wrote it, very creative but you struggled a bit to deliver it... try to add more words to make the flow more consistent instead of chopping it with pauses.

the song in general was great, the beat is nice, but was not a good choice for the singer.
nevertheless, enjoyable.

and lol at the end :laughing:
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Re: Gaston Ft Redzek - She Had The Words

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 21st, '10, 09:55

Big Ax-D wrote:that was enjoyable... your friend sings pretti good, but he needs to take clases, cuz I notice he is singing Mayor key to a minor key beat Lmao... so sometimes it can sound out of tune... but tell him to take a couple clases to understand what way to sing in x parts. non the less, very smooth and enjoyable

your verse.. :shakehead: ... buy a microphone :angry:
it was ok.... flow was a little too shaky, I like the way you wrote it, very creative but you struggled a bit to deliver it... try to add more words to make the flow more consistent instead of chopping it with pauses.

the song in general was great, the beat is nice, but was not a good choice for the singer.
nevertheless, enjoyable.

and lol at the end :laughing:

:worship: props for feeding......yo..the guy who sings is my brother :p ..i'll tell him to take classes yeh i guess that muhfuker can sing =P...and about my flow,i thought i would change a bit if i do some little pauses..just to do somethin different ya know..but my verse so short so i couldnt really do much :whistle: and yes i guess i struggle a bit to deliver it cuz i was singin it at first and i cant even sing for shit, so i just did it like that,this was at first take..!!

and oh yes about the outro ...ROFL ...we didnt know we were recording..and then we heard it and we was like yo that shit is funny hhahaa lets keep it for outro xD!!
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