Bar - Life In Reverse (Produced By Darren P)

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLjdClzJ_HE

new solo song, produced by darren p, concept track about life in reverse, homage to rewind.

feedback appreciated

[classthe_king]

That was a pretty good idea and well executed. Nice job

[classthe_king]

nice track man!

but i still raise the bar so high its got snow onit.

[Tash8]

i really wanna hear more touching tracks from you...remember the one you did about your dad and blah balh that was dope...

but onto this song --concept is real dope...

flow is good, there's times where you feel like you fall off, i dont think u actually do but u rush almost too much..you need better quality..lmaooo get dumber, lose my virginity hahaha interesting..

great great job on this, could be a lot better with better quality. love the lyrics, flow is solid (not really what stands out on the track, but lyrics did)

btw check out my new song impossible..

[Terry_M]

That was dope as fuck. I love concept tracks and this was done really well. I agree with Tash that the flow seems like it falls off a bit at times. But overall, this was a dope, dope track.

[Emadyville]

dope concept man, loved the intro too. beat was nice, but I wish your vocals were louder, i felt like a lot of shit I didn't hear exactly what you were saying, you should post the lyrics.

anyway, the flow was good but like tash said some parts seemed rushed, not sure it fucked the flow up just some shit was a lot faster so it seemed rushed. overall i really liked this, great job man

[Xray]

Beat was cool. Couldn't hear it much cause of the quality.

Idk what to say man, it was very messy. Flow was all over the place, the quality was bad, and I couldn't understand shit. Delivery was horrible. I heard more breathing and mumbling than lyrics. I was reading the lyrics as I was listening, and I still could'nt understand. Your pronunciation has gotten horrible imo. You choose a fast flow, but you have a bad delivery, and too many words in your lines. You're making it very hard for us to understand you. You're taking steps back with this kinda stuff.

You sound fine when you aren't putting a million words in your lines, so stop doing it.