Makin Me Cry

[Rizz]

New here, figured i'd start off with something i finished today.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OmuaofhFe6w

Feedback greatly appreciated.

[Terry_M]

I'll feed the first verse since that's your part. Your flow seems to be really polished, and is almost always perfectly on beat. The lyrics were really solid too. The only thing that could have been better was the delivery, maybe have put a bit more emotion into it.

The hook is also maaad catchy.

[ElementZ]

This is Element from the track, I'd also appreciate feedback too if you can drop some