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Wishin' - TJB

Postby tjb » Sep 7th, '10, 23:33

hey feed me on this one.. last time i dropped something you folks said i should work on delivery..... well here it is..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERn-Rv4Dpno
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Re: Wishin' - TJB

Postby tjb » Sep 8th, '10, 02:08

thanks man :happy: yeah i think i should probably throw a doller or two down for a new mic......... the rockband 2 mic, with sock as a spit cover isnt exactly cutting it anymore...
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Re: Wishin' - TJB

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '10, 09:38

the beat is pretti unique. I like it

you need to learn a couple tricks on cool edit/adobe audition... so u can get out the clarity at its 100%. a little advice hmm.. well, its too dry, change the reverb, need a noise reduction.. prolly add a gentle bass lift to your main acapella. if you need more detailed feed on mixing, don't hessitate to ask :y:

your delivery is really good, the flow is almost impressive, the second I noticed a couple spots where you struggled to catch a breath, thats due to to the writing scheme of that verse, so try to simply the flow a little on the parts you feel they cause struggle. but that first verse was crazy, got me nodding my head to it.

the lyrics, I like em, pretti deep, easy to get through, perfect work.

a nice little track, and I'm looking forward to listen to more of your stuff, great potential.
congrats :y:
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Re: Wishin' - TJB

Postby tjb » Sep 8th, '10, 22:32

Big Ax-D wrote:the beat is pretti unique. I like it

you need to learn a couple tricks on cool edit/adobe audition... so u can get out the clarity at its 100%. a little advice hmm.. well, its too dry, change the reverb, need a noise reduction.. prolly add a gentle bass lift to your main acapella. if you need more detailed feed on mixing, don't hessitate to ask :y:

your delivery is really good, the flow is almost impressive, the second I noticed a couple spots where you struggled to catch a breath, thats due to to the writing scheme of that verse, so try to simply the flow a little on the parts you feel they cause struggle. but that first verse was crazy, got me nodding my head to it.

the lyrics, I like em, pretti deep, easy to get through, perfect work.

a nice little track, and I'm looking forward to listen to more of your stuff, great potential.
congrats :y:



Thanks alot :D
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Re: Wishin' - TJB

Postby Weather Man » Sep 9th, '10, 07:40

This is a sick ass track dude. :smoking:
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