hey feed me on this one.. last time i dropped something you folks said i should work on delivery..... well here it is..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERn-Rv4Dpno
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Big Ax-D wrote:the beat is pretti unique. I like it
you need to learn a couple tricks on cool edit/adobe audition... so u can get out the clarity at its 100%. a little advice hmm.. well, its too dry, change the reverb, need a noise reduction.. prolly add a gentle bass lift to your main acapella. if you need more detailed feed on mixing, don't hessitate to ask![]()
your delivery is really good, the flow is almost impressive, the second I noticed a couple spots where you struggled to catch a breath, thats due to to the writing scheme of that verse, so try to simply the flow a little on the parts you feel they cause struggle. but that first verse was crazy, got me nodding my head to it.
the lyrics, I like em, pretti deep, easy to get through, perfect work.
a nice little track, and I'm looking forward to listen to more of your stuff, great potential.
congrats
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