Pass the goggles - Chris Leese Ft Bar & Killa (K.I)

[classthe_king]

Which verse were you?

[classthe_king]

Lyrics were good and funny at some times lol. Main problem with me was the delivery, maybe it's cause you had just got back but you sounded really uninspired, almost boring. Flow was good, can't really say much about that. I hope you post some more of your new stuff.

[dR3]

Can you up it on Usershare? Zshare takes too long to download.

[dR3]

This is a dope remix, love the hook.

I think Bar had the best verse, and Chris flowed the best.

Killa, your lyrics are pretty good, but you lack energy imo. As Class said, you sound bored. Sort that out and you'll be fine.

[Xray]

Ok I know what you need. You need someone to tell you STRAIGHT UP how you sound.

So I'ma be 100% real with you...

You sound so pussy and soft, and this doesn't work in Hip Hop brother. Your flow is boring and easy. Nothing good about it, besides staying on beat. You sound bored out of your mind, with no rhythm, no style, it's just not working at all. Your delivery is fucking everything up for you, it's making you sound different to what you pictured yourself sounding when you wrote this. You need to realize how easily you can sound better, just by switching up that delivery. Sound more active, sound like you're alive, so someone can bother listening to your shit. Start with energetic or beats that scream war, why? Because you need beats like that to build your confidence. Cause once you kill those beats, you will sound much more comfortable. You need to strengthen the sound of your voice, and build a style for yourself. Sorry if some of the stuff I said was harsh, I'm just trying to help you out, and give you some motive. Peace.

[M15HKA]

Xray kinda did all the feedback possible. But like he said act interested maybe even have a bit of anger like you are battling someone, because i liked the lines

[Xray]

Ok I know what you need. You need someone to tell you STRAIGHT UP how you sound.

So I'ma be 100% real with you...

You sound so pussy and soft, and this doesn't work in Hip Hop brother. Your flow is boring and easy. Nothing good about it, besides staying on beat. You sound bored out of your mind, with no rhythm, no style, it's just not working at all. Your delivery is fucking everything up for you, it's making you sound different to what you pictured yourself sounding when you wrote this. You need to realize how easily you can sound better, just by switching up that delivery. Sound more active, sound like you're alive, so someone can bother listening to your shit. Start with energetic or beats that scream war, why? Because you need beats like that to build your confidence. Cause once you kill those beats, you will sound much more comfortable. You need to strengthen the sound of your voice, and build a style for yourself. Sorry if some of the stuff I said was harsh, I'm just trying to help you out, and give you some motive. Peace.

Nah man not harsh at all, Infact its one of the reasons i like you dude. Your real, i was just saying to someone on msn last night even i know half of it is a confidence issue as i have said i been out of things for 2 years so to a degree it was jumping in the deep end again, i THINK i git things sussed now but as i said il try drop something thats actually new next week and see where i stand then. I appreciate it though man, you know what ya talking about (Most of it anyhow).

Don't sweat it bro, you have made dope tracks before, so I know damn well you can get back on your feet. You should see how I feed my bro's tracks, I literally get em mad as fuck, cause it's better to give negative feed than positive, when you want someone to improve. If I was to feed myself, I'd be more harsh, cause when you're satisfied with your shit, it kinda kills the hunger to improve. I only just got back on my two feet, so I know what you mean bro. No doubt man, 6 months is a long ass time, def heard better from you, and def expect more ill shit. Once you back on yo shit, we needa collab mayne.

[Kez]

Ah i remember Bar showing me this ages ago so i know it's old shit

lmao Jay and Silent Bob ftw

I can see your delivery has improved slightly, but not by all that much to be honest. There's a couple bits where a bit of stronger delivery appears but you still sound pretty bored overall lol and the voice is kinda the same as all the other tracks i've heard you on. The lyrics were decent but the concept kinda kills stone-dead any possibilities of complexity or particular skill so i'll give a pass on that. The flow was on point most of the time but there were a couple times where it seemed to veer off a tiny bit.

Overall it's average, but i know it's old so i just wanna hear something actually recent from you lol. And i agree with the Mike Skinner thing, only difference is Mike Skinner does it intentionally, yours sounds more like just a coincidence lol which kinda dampens the idea. But yeah i wanna hear something more recent from you first before i judge your shit completely.

First guy killed it though

Can i get returned feed on my track

[Xray]

Def agree man, I mean essentially i don't think anyone should ever reach a level where there like yeah that's as good as i can be because essentially you lose the battle right there. If you always set a goal to just improve on yourself than just inspiring to be as good as a certain person there is no limits. Ima work at it tho. And cool man, i look foward to it gives me sumin to work toward.

Hell yeah. Sky's the limit.

[$0 R3@L]

1st verse and hook was sick and the best thing about this.

its been a while chris but youre still strugling with confidence.Lyrics on the whole where decent you just dont sound like you mean what your saying.

[$0 R3@L]

yer waiting for kings of leon album to leak lol

im always poking my head in to catch up,heard you vanished from these parts a while back.Hope lifes treating you well.Mines changed big time.Got a baby on the way next march and im due for intake in the next month into intel corps uk army.lol

drop me a p.m every now and then,would like to know how your getting on.

speak soon.

[Mc Cubz]

just keep working on it killa you'll get sounding good soon! Who is on the hook and first verse - they sound like they're from my neck of the woods!

[Le Tunisien]

lol the first verse is so entertaining..uhm as for ur verse the flow was ok and simple though and the only thing i didnt like was ur delivery and thats about it,other than that good track guys

ps: would be cool if u guys feed my mixtape here viewtopic.php?f=38&t=98237 thx