man, u need to overlay it, give power to your voice, specially on the hook man. you know? like add a second line of vocals, or just do adlibs on the vocals that hit the rhyme, depends what u like better. some people do both.
what I love about it is the flow, at first is just ok, but as the song advances you get it flawless. definititely an improvement from ya man.
not more to fix, just the overlays I said, maybe a little diferent settings when you mix your vocals, maybe you'd like to do it a little more wet, diferent reverb. And just take the delivery/emotion a little step above and youre done.
plus damn, I loved the flow on this beat. I'm down to remix it with ya if you like
