Say Hello To Winter (Produced by 2Deep)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.reverbnation.com/#/artist/ar ... ngs/904120

last song, and yes its over THAT beat.....

{Chorus} X 2
now that the summers over//
i guess i'll go somewhere colder//
i wanna live a lil closer//
instead of being such a loner//


i started out summer trying to live on my own//
the money ain't right...another vivid mile stone//
another new home.....another place to adjust//
spirits at all time low....no raising them up//
my schooling ain't form...so i'm no pullin the norm//
then 9 to 5 it is....but i'm full and i'm worn//
now everybody know me....ok...show me//
and all these people...yet still feel so lonely//
i don't understand why it be so hard//
i'm scarred...but can't recall see me bleed so far//
so why my direction still dark and dingy//
why do these fucking tracks with deep bars up lift me?//
uhhhhmmm....look i can't answer that//
i wanna start a music grind..i see my chances wack//
see a new phase i don't fit...the dances ass//
don't wanna be broke tryna start a family track....//

{Chorus}

my hustle...well it's doing a bit better//
its hot and humid over here.....this is shit weather//
i'm working 14 hour shifts...no way to survive//
but the positive is...."hey i'm alive"//
i can't complain...even if i wanted to//
upgraded my set up...nothing to fuckin lose//
got a promotion....droppin the mission//
no more dishes....so please stop with the disses//
yea....i came up from a far away//
truck's a peice a shit...waiting on my car to break//
starting a buzz...writing and proving//
giving my shit out...people are liking my music//
but still feels like i'm fighting...and losing//
i see the stars in a rut....the sight is confusing//
i'ma start living like there's no tomorrow//
there's too much baggage i carry to show the sorrows//

{Chorus}

there was a bright spot...got to hang with my girl//
she's what i live for....i'm just sayin my world//
i had a great time....prolly the highlight of summer//
go back home and feel like my life is number//
the cash money larger...and i'm living it better//
not bad considering that i'm winning never//
i mean never winning....please excuse my grammar//
i got a shitty attitude if you knew my manner//
depression sinks in looking at my four walls//
the more i gain....then the more falls//
for me....i guess that when the sun shine//
i go to a dark place and end the fun times//
look...i'm just tired of this darkness//
and i'd rather just retire then to bargain//
but i'm poor.....so i guess i'm just struggle bound//
excuse me...i'll return to my hustle now//

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[B.A.D.]

Stop leaking songs from your tape!!!!

Thats what happens when you release your first single without completing or at least having 80+% of the tape finished. Beacuse otherwise you have to keep leaking tracks to get up the vibe for the tape.

ok. now
haha

THAT beat lol... thats what happens when u fucks with soundclick. cuz yeah, but actually your hook is better than the singing dude. cuz even if you dont hit the notes (to say it that way) u have something on direct relation to your song, and I dunno. it doesnt even sound bad, by the fourth hook I was already singing along u know. good one.

The verses are great as well as the lyrics, the third verse was the best tho, The flow went more natural, the energy was there. Btw, I'm starting to get concerned about topics for your tape cuz they've been sounding pretti similar.

The only feed I can think of giving you is change it, dont have this as the last track. its one of the most importants tracks of a mixtape, you can't give it away like that. You still have time for anotherone. But well, its all up to you. this are just organizing advices.

other than that the song is excelent, I want to download it but I dont understand how does that site works. lol...

great ass job

[Mr. Chambers]

Stop leaking songs from your tape!!!!

Thats what happens when you release your first single without completing or at least having 80+% of the tape finished. Beacuse otherwise you have to keep leaking tracks to get up the vibe for the tape.

ok. now
haha

THAT beat lol... thats what happens when u fucks with soundclick. cuz yeah, but actually your hook is better than the singing dude. cuz even if you dont hit the notes (to say it that way) u have something on direct relation to your song, and I dunno. it doesnt even sound bad, by the fourth hook I was already singing along u know. good one.

The verses are great as well as the lyrics, the third verse was the best tho, The flow went more natural, the energy was there. Btw, I'm starting to get concerned about topics for your tape cuz they've been sounding pretti similar.

The only feed I can think of giving you is change it, dont have this as the last track. its one of the most importants tracks of a mixtape, you can't give it away like that. You still have time for anotherone. But well, its all up to you. this are just organizing advices.

other than that the song is excelent, I want to download it but I dont understand how does that site works. lol...

great ass job

^i might change it cuz i might have 2 or 3 more tracks...but i wanna use that tracks a transition from my mood in the summer to my mood i'm currently in.

but thank you for listening

[Mr. Chambers]

BTW *puts pressure on sajjad* i'm waiting for him to finish the collab and one other collab to drop the tape.

[tjb]

really like this. i really like the hook too. nice job

[classthe_king]

I don't get the part about that beat I really liked the beat.

I really liked this track though, you rode the beat well and you had top notch lyrics as always, can't wait for the tape.

[Mr. Chambers]

^cuz steve and emady used it also. lol but thank you for listening.

[Emadyville]

When the hook first came in, it sounded just decent, but as it continued throughout the song it just sounded better and better, so great job on that.

The first 2 verses I thought were somewhat boring with your delivery, the flow wasn't that bad, but it def sounded just like you were reading your lyrics. The 3rd verse tho, the delivery was smoother with the lyrics and so was the flow, def stood out compared from the first two for those reasons.

[Mr. Chambers]

^thank you for the feedback. i might go back and re-record it lol

[Mr. Chambers]

up

[Mr. Chambers]

yall suck.

[gutawafang]

Not bad man. I like the flow. The chorus is not so good. It requires more harmonizing. Lyrics are full of multis, good.

Overall, good replay value.

[Mr. Chambers]

^good looking out fish

[Mr. Chambers]

up buttsex

[Phantom]

i was listenin to more of ur shit man, and it impressed me more and more and made me realize that not only do you have better lyrics and flow then me but your much better than me at my own style. you got a new fan bro listenin to ur shit makes me wanna step my game up.really good work on this and some of ur other tracks like demons and dry me up and a few others i cant remember the names of but ur sick man.