Take from me

[Blu]

What did you think of the "I'm so done with this shit I may as well WIPE!" Line?

[Trimss]

I'm not one to judge a verse off of one line but that line kinda ruins it for me. It's still a great verse, but it really bothered me lol. Because it's like an amazing, serious verse with a great flow and then.. he just drops one of the corniest punchline ever.

[12characters]

I'm not one to judge a verse off of one line but that line kinda ruins it for me. It's still a great verse, but it really bothered me lol. Because it's like an amazing, serious verse with a great flow and then.. he just drops one of the corniest punchline ever.

Yeah, that's exactly how I feel. Most of the shit lines are what ruin it for me, like on "Where I'm at".

Not totally though. I still like both of those songs, but I don't hold them as high as I could because of it.

[Jimmy Conway]

I like Royce's verse a lot more than em.

It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
I have nothing else to give you, nothing left to contribute
Farewell I bid you, but before I go, my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen, Slaughterhouse I give you!

All of that is fucking horrible.

The wipe line, not funny, witty or anything. Sounds like something lil wayne might say.

The second line....stupid. Why are you making another album if you have nothing left?

Third line, worthless, sounds like you're retiring, but you aren't.

Last line, again, shit. Your gift to us is slaghterhouse? They've made two shitty albums, so thanks for shithouse EM.


Royce showed Em up for sure on that track,

[Mr.DGAF]

I like Royce's verse more as well, em had some nice lines. Wasn't fond of his flow on the "appreciate flows" and the "slaughterhouse I give you" lines. That's my only complaint from his verse.

[Solace]

I like the song and both verses but I agree with Slim Cary about

It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
I have nothing else to give you, nothing left to contribute
Farewell I bid you, but before I go, my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen, Slaughterhouse I give you!

I've always felt this part is terrible and is flowed so awkwardly.

[chopsuey567]

song is great up until that punchline. christ, that is definitely one of the worst ones em has used in recent times.

[Eedee]

I like the song and both verses but I agree with Slim Cary about

It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
I have nothing else to give you, nothing left to contribute
Farewell I bid you, but before I go, my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen, Slaughterhouse I give you!

I've always felt this part is terrible and is flowed so awkwardly.

I always that flow as incredible. It felt so smooth, IMO.

And that part is him being hella sarcastic. He's obviously not quitting and he obviously doesn't believe he has nothing left to contribute.

[righfield]

I liked the song when I first heard it and still like it now HOWEVER not as much as I use to em just disappoints me, I mean in his prime if em had something tosay he would just come out and say it yet he just speaks crypticly here IF you can even call the verse cryptic. He just goes on about the same old same old blah blah blah fame blah blah blah hailie. That all worked with the tes, encore and recovery but it dosent work here. If the songs about songs leaking just say its about songs leaking... he could of made a great verse about how hes a perfectionist about how these leaks harmed his legacy in HIS eyes and drove home point that music and his daughters were his life and it would of worked but he didnt ether out of lazyness or upsetting stans. I guess we will never know but its a disappointment really imo

[Snakebeast]

I liked the song when I first heard it and still like it now HOWEVER not as much as I use to em just disappoints me, I mean in his prime if em had something tosay he would just come out and say it yet he just speaks crypticly here IF you can even call the verse cryptic. He just goes on about the same old same old blah blah blah fame blah blah blah hailie. That all worked with the tes, encore and recovery but it dosent work here. If the songs about songs leaking just say its about songs leaking... he could of made a great verse about how hes a perfectionist about how these leaks harmed his legacy in HIS eyes and drove home point that music and his daughters were his life and it would of worked but he didnt ether out of lazyness or upsetting stans. I guess we will never know but its a disappointment really imo

Your grammar is bad and you should feel bad. (kinda agree though)

[whiteamerica2]

"theyll appreciate me when im gone, they say it was ill right the way i kill mics" that line was very good.. however if he would have thought of something just a tad bit better than the following line it would be amazing.