Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[Innovation]

@ Coulter that was a great attempt, you caught most of the rhymes.

You missed these multi's in the opening few bars:

Angelina Jolie amigo/hand your penis to me I'll deep throat/stand between us then we gone see bro

Also, he goes on a 7 syllable streak.

broken up with the capsule/dope enough with the rap though/coke is cut with tobacco etc

[MikeNUFC]

Few more on BD:

'fake a sto(mach)' goes with the 'ache it works' scheme

losin him check the pulse/(re)fused to respect adults

(de)cided to strike back/tyre on the bike rack

nah that bully/after school de(tention)

way before/baby daugh(ter)

fat kid/acted

shove me in the lockers/cause his father boxers

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks Mike. Gets tough to see all the rhymes after a while haha. The only one of those I consciously passed on was the fake a stom(ach) and ache it works scheme. I wasn't too sure, so I just went with the simple fake separate from the rest of the scheme. But since someone else noticed it, I feel a bit better. The rest I just missed haha.

[Innovation]

Nice finds, I've added them in.

[Innovation]

Great find. Edited it in.

[Innovation]

Noticed a few more on Hello. Such an underrated song imo.

Shorty come back/score me some lap (dances)

can't match it/damn hatchet

[Sam.]

@ Menzo: Are the highlighting of the individual albums done, like you said you were gonna do?

[Sam.]

@ Menzo: Are the highlighting of the individual albums done, like you said you were gonna do?

My laptop that had most of Infinite, MMLP, Relapse and Recovery fuckin crashed so I had to start from scratch.

Ah, fuck. I know it takes a lot of efforts in doing that, but what can we do know. Well, with Inno in your team, shit shouldn't take long.

[EminemInsider]

Brain Damage - credits go to MR.DGAF

Feel free to edit this Menzo if you find any missed rhymes.

Verse 1
These are the results of a thousand electric volts
A neck with bolts, "Nurse we're losin him, check the pulse!"
A kid who refused to respect adults
Wore spectacles with taped frames and a freckled nose
A corny lookin white boy, scrawny and always ornery
Cause I was always sick of brawny bullies pickin on me
And I might snap, one day just like that
I decided to strike back and flatten every tire on the bike rack
(Whosssssh) My first day in junior high, this kid said,
"It's you and I, three o'clock sharp this afternoon you die"
I looked at my watch it was one twenty"
I already gave you my lunch money what more do you want from me?!?"
He said, "Don't try to run from me, you'll just make it worse..."
My palms were sweaty, and I started to shake at first
Something told me, "Try to fake a stomach ache it works"
I screamed, "Owww! My appendix feels like they could burst!
Teacher, teacher, quick I need a naked nurse!"
[N] "What's the matter?"
[E] "I don't know, my leg, it hurts!"
[N] "Leg?!? I thought you said it was your tummy?!?"
[E] "Oh, I mean it is, but I also got a bum knee!"
[N] "Mr. Mathers, the fun and games are over.
And just for that stunt, you're gonna get some extra homework."
[E] "But don't you wanna give me after school detention?"
[N] "Nah, that bully wants to beat your ass and I'ma let him."

Verse 2
[Eminem]
Brain damage..
Way be for/ way before my baby daughter /baby daughter Hailey
I was harassed daily by this fat kid named D Angelo Bailey
An eighth grader who acted obnoxious, cause his father boxes /cause his father boxers
so everyday he'd shove me in the lockers /shove me in the lockers
One day he came in the bathroom while I was pissin
And had me in the position to beat me into submission
He banged my head against the urinal til he broke my nose,
Soaked my clothes in blood, grabbed me and choked my throat
I tried to plead and tell him, "We shouldn't beef"
But he just wouldn't leave, he kept chokin me and I couldn't breathe
He looked at me and said, "You gonna die honkey!"
The principal walked in (What's going on in here?)
and started helpin him stomp me
I made them think they beat me to death
Holdin my breath for like five minutes before they finally left
Then I got up and ran to the / janitor's storage booth
Kicked the door hinge loose and ripped out the four inch screws
Grabbed some sharp objects, brooms, and foreign tools
"This is for every time you took my orange juice,
or stole my seat in the lunchroom and drank my chocolate milk.
Every time you tipped my tray and it dropped and spilt.
I'm gettin you back bully! Now once and for good."
I cocked the broomstick back and swung hard as I could
and beat him over the head with it til I broke the wood
Knocked him down, stood on his chest with one foot..
.. Made it home, later that same day
Started reading a comic, and suddenly everything be came gray
I couldn't even see what I was tryin to read
I went deaf, and my left ear started to bleed
My mother started screamin, "What are you on, drugs?!?
Look at you, you're gettin blood all over my rug!" (Sorry!)
She beat / me over the head with the re mote control
opened a hole, and my whole brain fell out of my skull
I picked it up and screamed, "Look bitch, what have you done?!?"
[M] "Oh my God, I'm sorry son"
[E] "Shut up you cunt!" I said, "Fuck it!"
Took it and stuck it back up in my head
then I sewed it shut and put a couple of screws in my neck

"I said" and "my head" in the second verse.

I also have always had a hunch that, at least in his head, he was thinking he'd pronounce "urinal" as "your-uh-nole" to go with broke my nose, etc.

[Innovation]

Working on "Almost Famous", it's pretty intense. I'll let Inno see it when I finish to proof read it and I'll post it.

Shoot it over whenever you're ready.

[Sam.]

Need full albums.

[Sam.]

Need full albums.

Takes a while when there are two people.

And no, that's not an invitation for others to offer.

What about Gennete?

[Sam.]

Yes, Geno. Lol, you can't even recognize your mole brother. Mr. DGAF can also help..

[JustEnjoytheMusic]

:shocked2:
I missed over half of those.

It took a while to highlight them. In the end we still weren't sure if we got them all. He takes the "sandwiching" very seriously in this verse, which makes the highlighting extremely difficult.

@Menzo: Thanks for the props

[Mr.DGAF]

Sleepin' now/down to sleep is an inverse. Only thing I noticed upon first glance.